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[eiko guy]

What would you think about a book. That I am thinking of writing. One where the world is ruled by an evil emperor that recruits teenage guys from other planets with high magical potential. They are pushed to the edge throughout there life until they try suicide and during their suicide attempt he sends them to his planet. Where he controls them with a seed that taints power inside and turns it evil which he can control. He makes an army out of them and when they come of age he devours their power to stay forever young. What if one kid had a magical destiny. one where he meets a girl who takes him in and gives him a real family. But the emperor comes back for him because of his power. Killing his first real parents and making his worst enemies. WHat would you think if the emperors name was gabriel and he had a Powerglove that granted him an amazing power. What if the main character's name was Tai, and he and Vicky also got power gloves giving them awesome power. What if I wrote a book about their magical journey to defeating Gabriel.


Tai = Digimon character might be changed to jade
Vicky = first person I told that I'm bi
Gabriel = first person that had a problem with me being bi thats why he's evil

[Wolf Kanno]

It's an interesting premise. I think it could be really good but you need to put some more info into everything. I don't care for the "power glove" idea but don't listen to me, I usually don't like "magical artifacts" in my stories so blow me off if you wish.

Beyond that, I like how you personalized it and I love the motivations of the villian.