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Polaris
SHINE-LAKE OF FIRE
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Location: Sunny Portugal
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Default [s] Red river

Oh well just felt like writting... It's not serious don't worry!

Red river

(break drums)

U can chase me
Run after me and see if u can catch
I'm too faster
Too good for you

(break drums and piano)

Can u feel it?
It's spreading everywhere
The river is turning red

I cried all my pain
Near the river and my blood
Feel like rain
In the river of sorrows that fit me like a glove

You ran away from your hands
They're too much clean for me
You're greater than little sands
You're just covering my eyes
So I don't see
That you never actually for moments

(the music stops for 3 secs)

Loved me

(breaks music and drums)

I cried all my pain
Near the river and my blood
Feel like rain
In the river of sorrows that fit me like a glove

When I drown in my own water
And you won't even bother
See the saints falling
See the apostles shouting
Feel their peace getting through your mind
And the apocalipse is a right

Cry all the pain
Near the river and let the blood
Feel like rain
In the river of sorrows that will fit u like a glove
When forgiveness won't be allow anymore...
Old 12-26-2006, 11:41 PM
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It looks nice Ana, but I do think you could change the "u" for "you"...

you know...
Old 12-27-2006, 02:14 PM
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