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nik0tine
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Default [P]Another Villanelle

It's just a gentle little flood
a creep, a drip, a turn
seeping through warped wood.

Clean. Sparkling clean scrubbing suds
scrubbing unripe flesh that yearns
for a gentle little flood.

A trickle, just a trickle. Maybe that could..?
No. The stomach just churns
seeping through warped wood.

Fairies fly and I, in the mud
bury the world as it turns.
Just a gentle little flood.

It's a lonely bedside boyhood
where bright lights unquenched do burn
searing through warped wood.

All of the kings horses rush like blood
to a small cut from paper, long since spurned.
It's just a gentle little flood
seeping through warped wood.

Last edited by nik0tine; 12-15-2006 at 07:14 AM.
Old 12-15-2006, 07:05 AM
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I'm not sure if this is the meaning behind the poem, but when I read a couple of times I felt as though it was a poem was about a man who was loved by a woman. This man though has a hard surface, has been hurt and her love only trickles in slowly? Something on those lines. It's an amazingly visual poem. I had images going off in my head everywhere. Really good, I liked it. It made me imagine.
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