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[Laddy]

Ok, then I guess your out. Anyway, thanks. So I guess we have a complete list of characters. I'll post chapter 2 soon.

[4evarisha]

Oh I am too late huh.Well here is a character i was out of town and didnt get to check this site I wanted to but I couldnt here is three character I just made them up I just want to help because I think this will be very sucessful.I didnt have good names so I just used the ones I know.

Name:Lenne
Age:19
Race: Human
Nation:Irvilles
Class:Songstress
Weapon:Microphone
Personality:A young girl who is shy but always stand up for herself she decides to journey like her two parents did with her two friends Natie and Aries.

Attack
Calamity(Inflicts poison and doom on one enemy)
Summon (Carbuncle)
Ctasy (Songstress abilities)
Item


Name:Natie
Age:19
Race: Human
Nation:Irvilles
Class:Black mage
Weapon:staffs
Personality:A cheerful black mage who is flirty but can be mean sometimes.


Attack
Doublecast(cast two spells at the same time)
Summon (Tonberry)
Black Magic
Item

Name:Aries
Age:19
Race: Human
Nation:Irvilles
Class:Warrior
Weapon:Sword
Personality:A girl who is tough and has no regrets with what she does and the choices that she makes.She use to dance for money so later she decides to protect her people so she decides to become a warrior.

Attack
Quick Attack
Summon (Cactuar)
Warrior(Use Warrior Abilities)
Item

Hope you like the characters.

[Laddy]

I guess I'll take Lenne. We already have a black mage and Warrior, but no Songstress, so Lenne is now our official final character! Note: Aries and Natie weren't bad though. However, you'll need a limit break, anyway, we have a potential love square!



Zeneth Dermott

Lenne Leah


CHAPTER 2


Fraiyde gazed at the night, wondering what could end the war. He took his sword, and waited for orders to attack. Fraiyde stood ground, and waited for a potential open spot. Then, the general called orders, "The Battle Of The Irvish Isles begin!" he said with confidence. Fraiyde then took out his sword, he though to himself, why was he agreeing to fight in a city full of innocent people? The Irvillians, always respectful people, were going to have to witness a battle, with blades, gunfire, and magic flying all over. Many men and women will die, some civilians, some soldiers. Five nations; blood will be spilt. Any someone will innocently die, but Fraiyde could not refrain. He was given the order to attack. Fraiyde then took out his weapon, and starting fighting. You participate in a battle or two, and then reach into a city...

Since 4evarisha seems like a good bet, we'll let her work on this one, and maybe have Fraiyde meet Lenne.

NOTE: I've decided there is no official main character, it focuses on everyone until like, CHapter 3, when the groups, like, Kamog and Dermott, Zeneth and I think Kori, Leah and Gagun, etc. all meet up, the game, like really starts to get cool.

[Firo Volondé]

4evarisha, so you don't have to scroll back and forth to work out what's what, I made a list of characters so far, their location, and personality.

Zeneth - Thief - Road to Andollan
Zeneth will do anything for the right of his city, Meraskur. He tries to make money to feed him and his pet wolf, Sago. Zeneth ocassionally likes to watch a movie, but mainly sticks with his job...

Leah - Black Mage - Eipsland
Very shy, keeps to herself. Both of her parents died when she was young, and was raised by her grandfather, also a servant. He, too, died recently. Spends most of her time waiting on the current prince of Eispland, Dermott, whom she has a crush on.

Gagun - Dragoon - Eipsland
A good friend to Leah, and since Eipish servants are well taken care of, he's Leah's bodyguard. He's quiet, but valiant. Kinda like Kimhari, he teaches Leah and helps her grow well. NOTE: He's actually a Dragaar, a near extinct winged Lizardmen.

Dermott - Blue Mage - Wieronant
A real ladies' man, (kinda like Edgar of FFVI), he is trying to convince his father to form an alliance with Dobrey, whom he believes will win the upcoming war with Eipsland's support, knowing that Wieronant and Irvilles will side with them. Not outright evil, more like an antagonist to Zeneth.

Kori - White Mage - Road to Andollan
She is very absentminded and also very to herself. She was orginally from Marshall but when both of her parents died in the war when she was 14, her aunt and uncle from Irvilles took her in. Sadly, her aunt died a couple of months later and her uncle has become an abusive alcoholic. One night she had enough and ran away and now is trying to live on her own

Fraidye - Warrior - Battle of Irvish Isles
Brave, strong, somewhat cold, but honest. He's a good tactician and a born leader.

Kamog - Red Mage - Wieronant
Nice, friendly, and smart, Kamog is a good moogle with good knowledge of Red Magic.

Terma - Gunner - Not introduced
Friendly but fiercely independent, Terma wanders around the world, avoiding the war as much as she can. She is one of Hiersker's closest friends, he wants her to settle down (somewhere near where he is, of course), and 'make something of her life'.

Quipant Quoile - Green Mage - Not introduced
Unlike the Qu's in FF9, Quipant isn't much of an eater. He spends his time sitting around, enjoying life. Rather different than most Qus, Quipant is more serious and intelligent.

Brialette - Monk - Not introduced
Brialette is a smooth and happy young woman with high hopes and confidence, Orocaz's Asian-like style of life made her repectable and quite brave.

Lenne - Songstress - Not introduced

Hope this helps you out.

EDIT: Lenne's limit
Limit Dance
Max out the limit bars for her comrade(s)

[Laddy]

I guess Lhasal's name is changed to..... Brialette! (I think Lenne and Leah are too nice of names!)

Also, every FF has a logo, I'm gonna start a survey for designers, what should be the logo?

A Playable Character?
Sago?
Jajun Dobrey?
The flag of... a certain country that'll play an important part of the story.... don't wanna spoil it, but you'll love the twist...


Also, every FF since 7 had a theme so which one should this be?

War?
Power?
Honor?
Devotion?
Good and Evil?
Ask me about one of those, if we pick a theme, we have to make it involved enough to call it that.

[Laddy]

I'm sorry to double post, anyway, we need some people for this:

Create Logo (Has to be like other FF's!)
Create Box Art (Preferably all the characters on it would be good.)
Another writer or two wouldn't be bad (no more character deisgners!)
Someone who could give us some music
Lastly, someone who could write and perform us a Soft Rock, Pop, and Techno theme songs, have it match the game, and give us some way to listen to it!

If you'd like one of these jobs, just post it, don't PM me or somebody.

[4evarisha]

Yeah I have a charACTER I like the limit break

[Laddy]

Yeah, you can work on the rest of Chapter 2, I start off some chapters and have people take it from there, so Chapter 2 is yours to work on, so whenever you feel like it, you can start! Oh, if you need ideas on length and stuff like that look at Chapter 1, it can be longer or shorter, but expect that to be in atypical length.

NOTE: In storylines, you are responsible for your characters plot twists, emotions, etc. You shouldn't make a twist for a acharacter that isn't yours. Like I'm in charge charge of Zeneth, Brialette, Gagun, Fraiyde, and Quipant. Also, since I thought of Jajun L. Dobrey, I got him, and know the twists involving the villian, HINT: You'll love it!


Note: 4evarisha doesn't want to write this chapter, I don't blame her, really. So, here I go!

Fraiyde is in the middle of Irvilles's capital, Irvine. He's killing anybody who's from Dobrey. Fraiyde then fights a couple of battles, than a mini-boss on his own, however, he has two humorous guest characters (temporary party members,) Biggs and Wedge. (OF COURSE!) Biggs has a staff, and misses a ton, but ends up hitting the enemy by tripping, slipping, etc. and says lines like "It's ownin' time!" or "If I don't own you, I'll own myself!) Wedge dosen't say anything, he just occasionally tosses a Hi-Potion to Fraiyde and Biggs when their HP reaces less than 30%, he dosen't even take damage! Then, after the mini-boss is killed, Biggs and Wedge leave, and Fraiyde gets shot. About three hours later, he wakes up in some kind of mini-theater, and this one girl about 19 or so is there, she's dressed like a performer, and many mats lie in the theater. Fraiyde rubs his head, "What's this, and what's goin' on here? Who are you?" The girl then giggles mildly and says, "Hi, I'm Lenne, I perform here, and now we're all taking care of some of the city's people, so they'll be away from danger, it's really kinda cool." Fraiyde smiles and then rubs his head for blood, he stands up and introduces himself, "I'm Fraiyde Comrotte. I'm a military man, do you know what happened to me?" Lenne smiles shyly and replies, "You'rer shot in the shoulder by a tazer gun, so you're in no real harm, just an instant knock-out thing, hey, wait a second..." Lenne calls for someone and whispers and mentions something about a doctor. "You should meet doctor Quoile."
Fraiyde apparently realizes the Qu origin, and scratches his hair, a Qu... with college education? That's rare, and even if they do have one, chances are they still just eat frogs and act lazy. A Qu walks in, he was wearing glasses and had some data in his hand, he checked down the list, despite being a Qu, a rather unsocial and loathed race, this Qu was actually a proper gentleman, and he was very clean and for a second actually looked like he could live in an Eipish mansion. "Hello, I'm Dr. Quipant Quoile," the Qu said, suprisingly, and his language was perfect, despite having the appearnace and voice of a Qu, "I'm a scientist, I study racial lifestyles, I was studying Choconoids, and I was stuck in here." Quipant stook out his hand, Fraiyde shook it, and still looked at the Qu, and was shocked in awe, this was rare and very unnatual, almost impossible, put this man actually defied the laws of Racialogy. Fraiyde stared at the man, and was very suprised to see such a polite Qu. Quipant then replied, "I hear you study Martial Arts, a Warrior, yes?" "Yeah, I'm a military man, a Sergeant, I'm actually quite famous amongst my nation of St. Veronica." Quipant then smiled, he looked down at his papers and said, "Ah, so do I! I study the discipline of Green Magic, and Lenne, although not officially under the discipline, is actually a Songstress." Fraiyde looked at the two, he tried not to laugh, and came out in a bizarre, inhuman, cry.
"Well, let's go!" Lenne said. After as long conversation, the three evntually set off...

After about an hour, they are in the wilderness. You then go into a fight and Quipant gives you complex battle tips, like magic types, limit breaks, etc. Then after like, 7 hours in game time, they reach the ocean (Irvilles is an island country, go to my profile to see the world map.) Then they reach..... Andollan by airship. About 30 miles away, Zeneth is there, waiting for Kori to wake up, then, Kamog and Dermott is in Wieronant, which is like, 100 miles away, and Gagun and Leah, are just inside the city, about 20 miles away, then, these people will meet.