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#17  Since not many people seem to be posting, I thought to make a character for Leah's crush: Name: Dermott Eipsland Age: 22 Race: Human Class: Blue Mage/Knight Weapon: Saber Appearance: Light brown hair, blue eyes, really tall and well-built. Personality: A real ladies' man, (kinda like Edgar of FFVI), he is trying to convince his father to form an alliance with Dobrey, whom he believes will win the upcoming war with Eipsland's support, knowing that Wieronant and Irvilles will side with them. Side: Not outright evil, more like an antagonist to Zeneth. There's no reason why we can't begin the story now, and add characters as we go. |
11-18-2006, 06:19 AM
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 | Umm, I guess I will come in. Name: Kori Age: 17 Race: Hume Nation: Irvilles Class: A White Mage Weapon: She is an expert with a Pole but has some small skill in swords and guns Appearance:  Personality: She is very absentminded and also very to herself. She was orginally from Marshall but when both of her parents died in the war when she was 14, her aunt and uncle from Irvilles took her in. Sadly, her aunt died a couple of months later and her uncle has become an abusive alcoholic. One night she had enough and ran away and now is trying to live on her own Last edited by Chocobo_head*; 11-18-2006 at 07:29 AM. |
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11-18-2006, 07:01 AM
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 | Ok, everyone that already posted can create one more character. Prologue (This is not a chapter!) It starts out with a high-end cutscene showing The Battle for Orrisburg, With Dobreian and Marsh soldiers goin' at it. It shows magic users, gunman, and warriors just duke it out. Then it shows a man, about 34-years old taking out a spear. He's a Lizardman, and it starts running around the battlefield. For about 20 minutes, he runs up and fights some guys in GAMEPLAY, and then he witnesses a murder, Creistor Dobrey, the son of Jajun Dobrey, Dobrey's Dictator, is dead. A man then takes out a sword, and it mshows a cut-scene duel for about 7 minutes. After that, are "unnamed" lizard says, "Fraidye, why did you do this!?" Fraidye looks up, and says, "Gagun, I'm just simply winning the war." Gagun, the lizardman, then tries to attack Fraidye, then some gun men enter and shoot both of them, small drops of blood are on the ground, and then the soldiers drag the two men out. About three days later, Gagun awakens to find himself in a room. Jajun Dobrey himself comes to him and speaks, "Gagun, I find you to be the man who killed my son, right?" Gagun stares at him, he doen't want to expose his friend, so he just makes a "Yes" gesture to him. Jajun shows no emotion, he lifts his hand, and says, "You will be a Eispish bodyguard, you will protect the servants, and pretend you didn't even witness a war in your life, we changed your last name from Windfling to Apercourt, you will serve for three years. Then, if you were well, we'll just kill you, if you try to escape, or attack, I will bomb this entire building, do you understand?" Gagun looks up to him "I do, sir." Jajun then looks at him slight angrily, and says, "Rest in Peace, Creistor Dobrey, son, soldier, and husband, 2017-2043." Jajun then give him "Bodyguard Papers of Job Application," and then leaves. Chapter One Begins Two years Later... Here's our Warrior: Name: Fraidye Comrotte Age:35 Race: Human Nation: St. Veronica Class: Warrior Weapon: Sword Appearance: Smooth, short, black hair. Fraidye has a scar on his eye, and wears a military jacket, open, and some jeans and boots. He also has his and Gagun's dog tags around his neck He's black, and has a small burn on his face, kind of rough, but certainly tough-looking. Personality: Brave, strong, somewhat cold, but honest. He's a good tactician and a born leader. Last edited by Laddy; 11-20-2006 at 01:01 PM. Reason: I had a character idea. |
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11-18-2006, 06:29 PM
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| | Uh, we already have a Thief, how 'bout a Red Mage? NOTES: Mogland doen't exist, use a real nation. Where's Personality? Anyway.... CHAPTER ONE: Meeting With Heirsker It shows Zeneth walking in the city of Meraskur, gun in hand, and 300 gil in a bag. He takes out the paper gil and counts it, "Three hundred gil! Ah man, I gotta get this to my uncle Heirsker!" Zeneth thyen walks down the street with a Choconoid asking is he wants a ride on him. Zeneth refuses, he's WAY too old to ride on someone, especially a spaient Choconoid. Zeneth then enters a gun shop, called, "Priory Brothers Arms." Zeneth walks in a passes the money to a man around fifty years old. "Here you go, Uncle Heirsker." Zeneth says, with a small wince of a smile. Heirsker then counts the money, and puts it in his pocket. "Well done, Zeneth. I gladly appreciate this." Heirsker said with a expression of satisfaction on his face. "The Eispland Royal Family is visiting for a film premier, I Want To Be Your Canary." Zeneth then sits down on a bench nearby, he takes a mint from Heirsker's desk, and sticks it in his mouth. With a mint still in his cheeks, Zeneth repiles optimistically, "Ah, I heard good reviews of that, I wonder how much the tickets cost." Heirsker then goes to his PC and checks for about a minute, "I looked into it myself, I wouldn't mind seeing it." Heirsker replied lookin at his computer. Zeneth says, "How much is it? We've worked for a month to find a way to entertain ourselves, can we handle it?" Heirsker then looks at Zeneth with a grin, "It dosen't matter, here, take these tickets, it's at the Ocordo District Theater, it begins at seven-thirty, don't be late. You have an hour and fifteen minutes, you might make it if you catch the bus." Zeneth eyes open at Heirsker and smiles, "Alright, I have to get get going, uncle Heirsker. See you later!" Zeneth runs out, and shows a cutscene of him running to the bus. It's in a movie theater, a group of royal people are waiting in a theater, with elaborate suits and supportive servants. A girl is standing by a young man, both waiting for a film to premeire, and the girl appears to be the man's servant. "Leah, do you mind sitting down? You're watching this film, too," the royal man said, acting chivalrous. Leah, the girl then sits. Chapter One gets passed to....... blitz_king10! Last edited by Laddy; 11-19-2006 at 06:12 AM. |
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11-19-2006, 03:49 AM
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| | Hmm... man, nobody's doing anything. I'm gonna have to change him a bit... Kamog Race: Moogle Class: Red Mage Nation: Orocaz Weapon: Boomerang Peronality: Nice, friendly, and smart, Kamog is a good moogle with good knowledge of Red Magic. Background: Basically, he's a normal moogle. Also, here's prononouciations, it's a different world, some it may sound strange. Marshall (mahr-shul) Marsh Archapheligho (ark-a-pell-i-goh) Archiphelighan St. Veronica (how it looks) Veronican Irvilles (Irv-ah-lees) Irvish Eispland (eesp-land) Eispish Dobrey (dobb-ree) Dobriean Democratic Dobrey (you know how it sounds) Demodobreian Wieronant (weer-roh-naunt) Wierash Orocaz (orh-oh-cahz) Orocanese Andollan (ahn-doh-lahn) Andollian Also, I guess we can have more than 10 characters, but we can't overdo it, and we still need one more female. Last edited by Laddy; 11-20-2006 at 01:09 PM. |
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11-19-2006, 08:01 PM
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