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[Yunas ballad]

It doesn't rhyme and it's not that good since it's my first Final Fantasy poem but i would still like your opinions on how to improve.

The sunset casts an orange glow,
On the dead, the injured.
The sorrow grips me by the heart,
And tears flow, glittering in the dusk.

Yet he stands there, smiles,
His eyes full of warmth and kindness,
He says we'll make it through,
Together.

When sendings and Sin come into play,
He's always there.
To wipe the tears off my face,
Tidus, my dear guardian.

[Marluxiaswife]

its really nice ^_^

[Yunas ballad]

thankyou! i have a writing head on at the moment so i might post some more later.