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[Owen Macwere]

Well, If you post any more, I will be more than happy to read them, but if you think you've had enough, then know that i really enjoyed reading those ones, and I wish you a good luck in the future.
I am glad she is still loving you, I am glad for you.
God luck, and well, keep up.

[Twisted Tinkerbell]

If you ever stop writing songs I'll cry! I love your songs so much they're so full of emotion.

[BizarroSephiroth]

These are awesome! If they go to a metal rhythm, sweet! I would like it if it was progressive metal-ish. You should release a CD if u can get a record deal!

Sweet tho, maybe you should post some videos!

[Sunny Day Suicide]

Wow, dude, your good at this. So political. So angry. Just to note you've had 2 choruses about governments that ryhme lies/ demise. The fans would be pretty dissapointed.

[Shiny]

Originally Posted by I Am Stoner ^

But then my mind suddenly clicks,
Why the hell did I think this,
I wake up in reality feeling bold,
Then shrivel and tremble again in the cold,
You said to me that you would be there,

Then you discarded my heart without a care,
The pain you make me feel will never die,
The tears start to run from my eyes,

Interesting. That would make a good chorus.

You bring out the worst in all people.

Great line!

Life messes around with your head,
So many smurfed up people wish you were dead,
Dictators, Society and Countries too,
The people owned by them have not got a clue,
They are just part of a smurfed up game,
The aim of the game has World Domination as its name,
People believe the lies on T.V.,
What the goverments tell Society,

So very true.

[I Am Stoner]

Here is a song I just wrote.

In a little place in the back of my mind,
There is a amazing light that shines,
Although im not to sure why this light is kind,
There is a hole in my soul and it is so deep,
I lost someone who came from heaven,
Im sitting here crying to myself,
hoping that she will be mine,

I lost something close today closer than my dad,
A woman who loved me so,
Please please please my love,
Say that you will not go,
My heart longs for you, my body does to,
Please my princess, please come back,
So you can be my gardian angel,
Coz your really getting the nack.

From east to west I need you,
From east to west to you I cry,
From east to west I need you,
Hold me like a curtain closed,
Against the winter night.

Oh my love im sorry please come back,
I dont want my life to be torn,
When you are with me I feel secure and warm,
When you say you love me when you say you car,
I feel a light that comes down from heaven,
That light in my mind it is hurting inside,
But it let me know your mine.

From east to west I need you
From east to west to you I cry,
From east to west I need you,
hold me like a lover holds her man,
Against the pains of life.

There is a knife on the top here,
It stay where it is though the kiss of death,
This kiss of death god says it might be his,
I cant stand being away from you,
I need you here so I can kiss,
Your rosey red lips that are plump and sweet,
And bussom so round and soft,
In your breasts I need to rest,
It would make me feel so secure,

[Owen Macwere]

.........Awesome......very touchy.

[I Am Stoner]

Thank you my friend. I managed to write that in the sea of tears constantly flowing from my eyes. Im so depressed at the moment.