:p: Thunder of love

Cloudstrife4003 · 05-23-2006, 03:31 AM

As i look into your eyes
I see thunder
a fiery gleam of life
it is as lovely as it is bright
this poem i write
is as beautiful as the night
As i come to an end
I wish i could have love in my life
but it feels as though my wish is very blight.

My first poem!

Genji · 05-23-2006, 03:51 AM

Nice! Keep workin at it and youll get even better ^_^

Regulus

Cloudstrife4003 Banned Location: oklahoma,bethany	#1 :p: Thunder of love As i look into your eyes I see thunder a fiery gleam of life it is as lovely as it is bright this poem i write is as beautiful as the night As i come to an end I wish i could have love in my life but it feels as though my wish is very blight. My first poem!
05-23-2006, 03:31 AM

Genji Banned Location: Ostrheinsburg Castle	#2 (permalink) Nice! Keep workin at it and youll get even better ^_^ Regulus
05-23-2006, 03:51 AM