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[Genji]

::impression::

when i look at these clouds,
i just have to close my eyes,
because where does it end?
when i look at the sky,
i have to lay down and wonder,
because when will it end?
and when i look at you,
the deep color in your iris,
it seems to go on forever
and i get an impression,
through your eyes.
the sky turned black,
the atmosphere enveloped
in darkness,
i think to myself,
this opus of everlasting,
plays a cloud of operandi in my head,
and i close my eyes,
and fall back into the cluster,
and when i open my eyes,
i see you
and i get an impression,
through your eyes,
the deep color in your iris,
drowns me in the pools of
impression.

[Cloudstrife4003]

Kool...

[Dignified Pauper]

Wonderful imagery, good language, and interesting choice. The repetition of the idea of something ending. It ties the sky in as the metaphor very well. Wonderful job indeed.

[Genji]

Thank you! ^_^