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Heero Yuy NWZC
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Default My poems, hope you like them

I don't make poems often, but when I do they tend to be pretty emotional. Right now I'm going through something and I have three poems to have to do with it. They are in chapters. Chapter 1 is of the past, how the whole evnt started. Chapter 2 is of the present, what has happene drecently with that event. Chapter 3 will not come out until after school as I am waiting on something that will most likely never come, but I'm waitin anyways. So yeah, hope you like the first too and they're pretty emo just so you know.

Chapter 1 of 3

I revealed myself to you
Near the end of an educational year
You are struck and speechless
Not knowing what to say
I leave you to your mind
And you don't think about it
You cast it away
I reserved that feeling for you
That one day we would be
But you thought it would blow over
Like a leaf in the wind
Months later I reveal myself to you again
But in a far away land
You thought it would disappear but it is clearly still there
You are struck yet again speechless
But this time you say something
You were not ready
You had no answer at the time
I waited for that answer
Even now but it has not come
When will it? I shall not know
Only her and her mind have the answer
But her mind will not think of it

Chapter 2 of 3

I lay there
In a room of black
Hoping the light will come soon
I wait for her answer
It has not come
I hold on to was is now only shreds of hope
But those shreds are slowly fading away
Depressed, emptiness
A daily routine now
I hide it so as not to harm others
Not to affect others
So that they do not feel the same as I
I wait, thinking that she might say it
Say what I've been waiting for
But it hasn't come yet
Not even a glimpse, nor a hint
Not a cue, nor a sign
I now lay in a wasteland of falsity
Hoping, wishing, praying to be let out
And that my answer be given
Old 05-11-2006, 05:52 AM
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I'm sorry this is happening to you.
Old 05-11-2006, 06:05 AM
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It's an okay poem, at any rate.
Old 05-11-2006, 07:12 AM
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I guessed as much. And Cassey, it's ok. It'll be over soon.
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this is great heero........it strack me stright ahead.....i didn't know u were passing in these things and i am sorry.... but u get my idea and advice:
never seek who will never seek you
don't ever want who will never want you
don't feel pain for those who don't desirve it
cause life is long and the road is ahead
seek whoever u love and gives love in return
never trust who don't trust u
live free like a bird...... like a bird
hope u understand me.... i wish u a happy life
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*claps* That was beautiful.
Old 05-11-2006, 05:27 PM
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Yes, indeed it was. Thank you Owen.
Old 05-11-2006, 05:32 PM
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u mean my advice cassiopeia???!!!!..... i was only trying to help and this idea strack me so suddenly..hehe....thanks
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