Song!

Megami · 07-30-2004, 08:58 PM

This song is inspired in my new bf who brought hope to my life ! Talk to me, read my eyes as I read yours. / life isnt complete / i want to spend my empty hours. // so much pain , so much sorrow we can regain. (but i trust in you) chorus [come and feel the rain/ come and fill the vain. After so many falls, my heart found you. But I go thru walls to get over you. (repeat 1st part

ShlupQuack · 07-30-2004, 09:36 PM

It's hard to get the gist of songs without a melody... but it seems cool.

Breine · 07-30-2004, 10:49 PM

It's good, but to me it seems more like a poem maybe?

Megami · 07-30-2004, 11:35 PM

Well it isnt quite finished yet but I v got the melody in my mind. Thanx for reading and commenting.

ShlupQuack · 07-30-2004, 11:51 PM

Originally Posted by Breine

It's good, but to me it seems more like a poem maybe?

Well what would you call a song without music? xD

Megami · 07-31-2004, 12:33 AM

Lol yeah maybe

but there r still some differences beyond the melody. In poems : no chorus no bridges , so they wont b repeat. I think a song always want to tell u somethng and it screams that message in the chorus. Poems are more like expressing my feelings

just my opinion anyway lol . By the way if i could i would sing for u lol

Megami Location: Portugal	#1 Song! This song is inspired in my new bf who brought hope to my life ! Talk to me, read my eyes as I read yours. / life isnt complete / i want to spend my empty hours. // so much pain , so much sorrow we can regain. (but i trust in you) chorus [come and feel the rain/ come and fill the vain. After so many falls, my heart found you. But I go thru walls to get over you. (repeat 1st part
07-30-2004, 08:58 PM

ShlupQuack Administrator It is My Density Location: California	#2 (permalink) It's hard to get the gist of songs without a melody... but it seems cool.
07-30-2004, 09:36 PM

Breine ...now in China! Location: Denmark	#3 (permalink) It's good, but to me it seems more like a poem maybe?
07-30-2004, 10:49 PM

Megami Location: Portugal	#4 (permalink) Well it isnt quite finished yet but I v got the melody in my mind. Thanx for reading and commenting.
07-30-2004, 11:35 PM

ShlupQuack Administrator It is My Density Location: California	#5 (permalink) Originally Posted by Breine It's good, but to me it seems more like a poem maybe? Well what would you call a song without music? xD
07-30-2004, 11:51 PM

Megami Location: Portugal	#6 (permalink) Lol yeah maybe but there r still some differences beyond the melody. In poems : no chorus no bridges , so they wont b repeat. I think a song always want to tell u somethng and it screams that message in the chorus. Poems are more like expressing my feelings just my opinion anyway lol . By the way if i could i would sing for u lol
07-31-2004, 12:33 AM