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[KagoBon]

Heres another song I wrote a few days ago

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Too much love
Written by Karly(KagoBon)


sometimes when one looses,
sadness fills my heart

la la la...
i keep telling myself to let go
ah...

wherever theres too much love,
i suddenly grow sad
the sadness of love will be torn apart
because of my hatred for love

la la la..
and sometimes when two people dance,
and sometimes when two people kiss,
and sometimes when two people argue,
i'd rather be alone than with him

la la la..
Sometimes when one wants,
madness fills my heart

la la la..
i keep telling myself not to fall in love
ah..

whenever your with that girl,
i suddenly turn sad
why am I sad now when love is nothing
because of my hatred for love?

la la la la...

when his face turns to mine,
when he smile at me,
when he laughs at me,
i'd rather be alone than with him

wherever theres too much love
i suddenly turn sad
the sadness of love will be torn apart
because of my hatred for love

la la la....

[FallenSilence]

That's great! Were you actually thinking of putting music to your songs, KagoBon?

[nik0tine]

if you are gonna put music into it i have some suggestions. in parts like this:

"la la la...
i keep telling myself to let go
ah..."

add another lalala after "i keep telling myself to go" and then after the lalala add another thing that starts with "i keep telling myself..." but end it differently. then put the ah... at the end. i think taht will make it sound much more musical, and catchy.

[KagoBon]

okay, thats a good idea nik0tine

i have a song this song will match too, it's japanese song, though

i wish i had music with it

[FallenSilence]

If you don't play an instrument, tell me what kind of music you want to go with the song and I'll try and work something out, if you want.

[KagoBon]

Originally Posted by Doom

If you don't play an instrument, tell me what kind of music you want to go with the song and I'll try and work something out, if you want.

Cool! If only I had a microphone for the computer, I could sing it. Maybe one day I could get one, I could sing it. Well, my favorite instrument is the violin, though I don't play it. The song will do good as a slow song. A ballad, maybe....

Thanks!

[FallenSilence]

I play guitar (quite badly). Does that help?

[nik0tine]

I play bass, if you can send me your guitar work, i will be able to write a pretty simple bass line that works fairly well.

"Cool! If only I had a microphone for the computer, I could sing it. Maybe one day I could get one, I could sing it. Well, my favorite instrument is the violin, though I don't play it. The song will do good as a slow song. A ballad, maybe....

Thanks! "

ok, taht should work. i actaully pictured it as a semi fast paced, cheesy poppish love song. kinda like that one song, i think its by donna summers, called "you can't hurry love". but yeah, if doom can come up with a nice slow meolody, i will definetly insert a bass line for you. i need the experiance anyway.