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[Rye]

It's been a while since I made a poem. I've been really into the song Broken by Seether and Amy Lee, so here's a poem kind of based on the song. Like I've said, it's been a while, so it's not all that good.

Broken

Eversince we said farewell,
nothing is the same.
You still linger in my mind,
your voice, our love, your name.

I still can't just say good bye,
accept the fact you're gone.
The present is not enough for me,
I need you to make me strong.

The photographs on my wall,
still frames of our memory's past
It's all I have left of
your smile, your face, your laugh.

And I've come to realise
I'm broken without you.

[nik0tine]

thats good. i would change nothing.

[FallenSilence]

I can't see anything wrong with that at all. Well done!

[Rye]

Thanks!