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#1  Song: "The One" This is my third song that I've written. It has a deeper meaning than the others. THE ONE What do you really think of me? Doesn't matter what I think of you The makings of a fantasy The makings of a dream come true Loving you brings so much pain Caring is too much to bear This is driving me insane Feelings I don't want to share You're the one I can't stand, you're the one I adore You've got the face of an angel, the mind of a whore You're the one that I worship, the one that I curse The one who makes me feel better, then makes me feel worse I walk alone through darkened scenes Overshadowed by your name Can't quite figure what this means My life will never be the same You're the one I can't stand, you're the one I adore You've got the face of an angel, the mind of a whore You're the one that I worship, the one that I curse The one who makes me feel better, then makes me feel worse What do you really think of me? Doesn't matter what I think of you Overshadowed by your name The makings of a fantasy The makings of a dream come true My life will never be the same You're the one I can't stand, you're the one I adore You've got the face of an angel, the mind of a whore You're the one that I worship, the one that I curse The one who makes me feel better, then makes me feel worse You're the one I can't be near You're the one that my heart fears The One |
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 | good. really good. the only suggestion that i have is this: The one who makes me feel better, then makes me feel worse i would change that to something more like: the one who makes me feel better, the one who makes me feel worse. it flows better and should be easier to put music to. it jsut all around sounds better imo. of course, its your song so you may do what you wish. over all, it is good. i give it two  |
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07-19-2004, 10:25 AM
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