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#1  Stars [Song] the stars say we can't be together what do they know all that matters is i love you... and did you know? it will work out forget what they say what do they know they're stars anyway they're stars anyway your friends think that you're too good for me what do they know all that matters is you love me... and do they know? it will work out forget what they say what do they know they're stars anyway they're stars anyway we know we're right for each other what do they know all that matters is we're in love... and did you know? it will work out forget what they say what do they know they're stars anyway and did you know? it will work out that's what we say that's all that matters we're stars anyway that's all that matters we're stars anyway |
12-12-2003, 03:09 AM
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 | I like what you're doing with the lyrics, but what I would suggest is adding a LOT more to your verses. It's a very short chorus, and with short verses ( one verse has 3 lines) it almost seems repetitive. Also more lyrics will add some melody to it, but if you think about it most songs are 3-5 minutes long. It took me less than a minute to read it. It's very lovely though so far, and I really feel the lyrics because I went through it when I was about 16. It's good how it is, but just beef it up a bit. 7/10 |
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12-12-2003, 03:48 PM
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