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[Angel_Reaper]

My love for you is true,
I thought for a minute but knew,
You would break my heart,
Should have stopped you from the start,
Now that I am stronger,
Scince I an with you no longer.




A peom I did few years back when I was about 18 or so. Tell me what you think.

( I took you advice and made a thread Dark_ Paladin_Cecil. If I misspelled your name sowry. )

[Leeza]

I think that the last two lines would read better and give the poem more meaning if they read:

Now I am stronger
Since I am with you no longer.

or

Now that I am stronger
I am with you no longer.

Those two lines are a little confusing the way that they are written right now, but otherwise, it's a good poem.

[Angel_Reaper]

yeah thanx that does sound alot better. what do ya aspected it was my first broken heart and i didnt know how to cope with it. and i heard writing poems will realease the pressure of a broken heart, boy was they right, and this was my first one. (oh course i was 18 and now i am ~ahem~ 26 XP) thanx again Leeza. . i might put my better ones on once i over come my shyness :o

[Angel_Reaper]

Today is like any other day,
Of pain or which is here to stay.
I lost the only thing I hold dear,
My soul is gone from my life long years.
You stoled it away,
For each day you keep it you will pay.
For I will learn to take your soul,
Which mine you stole.
For each passing day,
This is how I will learn to pay.
For you to see,
Keeping my soul from me,
You have condemned me to hell,
And I will condemn you as well.




heres another freakish poem.

Leaning against the corner,
Watching humans passing me,
With their stares of predjudice.
For they do not understand
Of who I am.
They try to decieve me with their righteousness.
Tring to make me what they are.
Breaking my spirit and capturing my soul.
But I am stronger than what I appear.
They will not break my spirit.
They will not capture my soul.
For I am who I am
And I will not bend to thier will.

Angelee Oct. 2003
Must be Halloween and October weather

[Angel_Reaper]

I am sitting here waiting for you.
Wondering if you ever come.
Hoping you never leave me.
Wishing you will be around me forever.
For you know are my guardian angel,
In Heaven keeping an eye on me.
Being my savior when I need it,
Guiding me though tough times,
Loving me when I am feeling unloved,
Watching me proudly when I am doing something right.
Even though I miss you physically,
I know you be with me spiritually.


Dedicated to all my family that I loved so much that is gone from this Earth.
Inspired by my Grandpa Will. I love you.

Angelee Nov. '2003

Sorry to double post but I didnt want to put this one with the old one on top.