Tearletting [P]

Necronopticous · 10-12-2009, 08:50 AM

sour gumdrop grimace down

sheet pleat muzzle pout

salty ducts sweetening

Dignified Pauper · 10-12-2009, 03:33 PM

This is almost a backwards haiku of 7/5/6... So, I'm just going to consider this a haiku since rules are broken all the time and say this is awesome.

I think EoFF has accumulated some great poets. Nicely done Necro.

Necronopticous · 10-12-2009, 06:23 PM

Not written with any traditional form in mind, but thanks for reading.

Marshall Banana · 10-12-2009, 06:51 PM

Kawaii Ryûkishi · 10-14-2009, 03:55 AM

There's nothing sweet about it. Sheet pleats nuthin'.

Necronopticous · 10-14-2009, 06:56 AM

We'll just have to agree to disagree.

Marshall Banana · 10-14-2009, 11:25 AM

Is this poem about rape?

Necronopticous · 10-14-2009, 05:39 PM

Not specifically.

Necronopticous Former Staff 虎姫 Location: New Astro City	#1 Tearletting [P] sour gumdrop grimace down sheet pleat muzzle pout salty ducts sweetening
10-12-2009, 08:50 AM

Dignified Pauper Score: 0 out of 2 Location: Colton's place	#2 (permalink) This is almost a backwards haiku of 7/5/6... So, I'm just going to consider this a haiku since rules are broken all the time and say this is awesome. I think EoFF has accumulated some great poets. Nicely done Necro.
10-12-2009, 03:33 PM

Necronopticous Former Staff 虎姫 Location: New Astro City	#3 (permalink) Not written with any traditional form in mind, but thanks for reading.
10-12-2009, 06:23 PM

Marshall Banana Rorikon Princess Location: Under the Sea	#4 (permalink) =O
10-12-2009, 06:51 PM

Kawaii Ryûkishi Administrator Long Ranger Location: Future rhythm	#5 (permalink) There's nothing sweet about it.
10-14-2009, 03:55 AM

Necronopticous Former Staff 虎姫 Location: New Astro City	#6 (permalink) We'll just have to agree to disagree.
10-14-2009, 06:56 AM

Marshall Banana Rorikon Princess Location: Under the Sea	#7 (permalink) Is this poem about rape?
10-14-2009, 11:25 AM

Necronopticous Former Staff 虎姫 Location: New Astro City	#8 (permalink) Not specifically.
10-14-2009, 05:39 PM