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 The Dark Side(its a backwards haiku) waiting for light forever catching every glimpse longing for a path outward bringing their hope to despair gently calling out "our souls are longing for peace" they know there is no way out a single soul brings until they find a way home (ps. i sorta messed up with the sylable thing...i forgot that it was 5, 7, 5 not 7, 5, 7. Whoops!  )Last edited by ikb4liunoit929; 05-15-2008 at 12:34 AM. Reason: i forgot the"for" 
05-15-2008, 12:27 AM
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 At least you got the right numbers even if they were not quite in the right order? Anyways, I liked it.
05-15-2008, 12:32 AM
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 uhh well...i tried!!!!but yea...im not that good of a poem writer...im more of a big picture person so i'd have to write tons of haikus and make a story...in fact i might do that...can u guys tell me what i should write about?thanx!     
05-22-2008, 12:39 AM
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| You're just 13 ^^ so don't worry you have plenty of time to develop your writting skills Try first free verses like forget the metric and ryhme and focus just on words! I began to write sonnets when I was your age and then gave up when I realized they were so harsh! Poetry takes a lot of time and skill to write ^^ Practise first and post your outcomes, the more you write the better you will get.Also it helps to read a lot!  Not just to create your own style but also to see some new words and ways of writting!
05-22-2008, 10:32 AM
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| well i love reading!!!!the reason i got started into writing poems was because my lit. teach was starting a new assignment where we had to write 1 or 2 copies of every poem and my sonnet was about being at the lake....and she liked all of my poems and said that i should try becoming an author...so i am starting with poetry
05-22-2008, 11:24 PM
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