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[themagicroundabout]

a short story i wrote yesterday in the early hours of the morning.
perhaps the start of something more.

i would appreciate it very much if anyone would check it out and give some kind of feedback on it.

it's on my deviantart page:

beaulivres on deviantART

thanks.

[Aerith's Knight]

very poetic.. i liked it.. but tbh the font was annoying to read at times.. not in the beginning.. but in the middle.