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I Am Stoner · 03-12-2008, 03:02 AM

Now that I am gone
Where are you?
Now that im back here
How are you?
Did you forget about me
When I left?
Was it all a set up
My heart theft?

Now did you really mean it
Or was it just a phaze
Or was it just to pass the time
A dying phraze

Are you messing with me
Or are you true
Coz I really mean it
When I say I love you

Polaris · 03-12-2008, 09:08 PM

Never write when you are feeling things. People usually just throw up their feelings and in a literary way it's horrible.

Write when you're away of those feelings and then remember them! Like that you'll be able to add new things and even introduce others!

Vyk · 03-12-2008, 11:54 PM

I dunno. I kinda liked that you could tell it came from the heart and not just a memory. Its easier to relate to. Good poem. And I feel for ya

I Am Stoner Location: Allie's heart <3	#1 Untitled Now that I am gone Where are you? Now that im back here How are you? Did you forget about me When I left? Was it all a set up My heart theft? Now did you really mean it Or was it just a phaze Or was it just to pass the time A dying phraze Are you messing with me Or are you true Coz I really mean it When I say I love you
03-12-2008, 03:02 AM

Polaris SHINE-LAKE OF FIRE Location: Sunny Portugal	#2 (permalink) Never write when you are feeling things. People usually just throw up their feelings and in a literary way it's horrible. Write when you're away of those feelings and then remember them! Like that you'll be able to add new things and even introduce others!
03-12-2008, 09:08 PM

Vyk Location: Waiting..	#3 (permalink) I dunno. I kinda liked that you could tell it came from the heart and not just a memory. Its easier to relate to. Good poem. And I feel for ya
03-12-2008, 11:54 PM