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[Death By Moogles]

You'll have found this in my possessions
Amongst my tattered clothes and gear,
Folded up very tightly,
Hoping to never be opened again.
I plan to rip it up eventually -
Let it's words wither up and die
Because I know without a doubt
I'll make it home alive.
But in case you have to read this,
I have a few requests:
Hold close our memories from this life
And know that I'll find you in the next.

This was commissioned for a girl at my school, who will be using bits and pieces of it for a narrative in some talent show or something.

Oppinions would be nice.
^_^

[Disco Potato]

Aw, it's nice ^_^. Simple but powerful. Just one thing though: in the sixth line, "it's" should be "its."