So you want to be a journalist?

rubah · 10-27-2007, 04:52 AM

http://www.nytimes.com/2007/10/25/bu...in&oref=slogin

Your goal? Make this article (or a portion) readable and post it here.

Winner is whoever makes a coherent and enjoyable read. (hint, if you think that this is a piece of exceptional writing, please try for the other prize)

Anti-winner is whoever can make it worse.

Good luck!

(does cookie monster look like a journalist to you? Maybe he needs a hat)

Shiny · 10-27-2007, 05:29 AM

Student’s Ad Gets a Remake, and Makes the Big Time

Well, basically a student’s ad gets a remake, and makes the big time. Uh and yeah, a whole bunch of crap happened in between. Big T in the house!

Something happened with an iPod or whatever. Hackzors tried to get the best of technology, but it conquered in the end.

So, like yeah and so then people were all like, "Whoa! This is amazing!"

And some other dude was like, "We never knew music could come out of square things!"

Apple was all like, "We represent the lolly pop kids!"

So Mr. What's-his-face was like, "Wut. No wai! Gtfo!"

And then he took his ass over to Los Angeles where there's all these wildfires and

. It's pretty messed up. It just goes to show you that God will smite you if you refuse to not be stupid.

Then, this guy whose last name rhymes with "chow" was all like, "Dayuuuuum son! This ish is hott!!!!"

And now it will be featured every where. Every where mainly being T.V. shows that you're probably ashamed of watching. *cough* Desperate Housewives *cough*

Anywayz, some other stuff with Youtube occurred and that's basically it. You will regret reading this. THE END.

rubah · 10-30-2007, 05:39 PM

A good entry for the terrible camp 8)

rubah Site Staff Cid's Knight I am not a committee! Location: Don't forget you're not alone	#3 (permalink) A good entry for the terrible camp 8)
10-30-2007, 05:39 PM