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[nik0tine]

I started composing this sometime around 11 pm. It's now 6:30 am and I've just barely finished it. This is perhaps my most successful composition. At 5:23, 3 pages, and 114 measures long, it's definetly something for me to brag about. I used Mozarts Turkish March as a guide while composing this. The form is very similar, almost identical. Anyhow, I hope you all enjoy listening to this as much as I enjoyed making it!

Rondo in A Major - Putfile

[Polaris]

oh wow that's really good Very very good

[nik0tine]

Update: I showed this peice to my teacher today. He thoroughly destroyed it using adjective like "AWEFUL!" and "BLAH BLAH BLAH!!!"

[Araciel]

awe-full, full of awe.

[Xaven]

Failure. Though, Finale 2007's GPO with a high-reverb turned on sounds nice for piano. Your computer did a great job, it did. :D

Generally, it sounds weak and unsupported. The harmonic progression is simple yet still a bit funkay. I vi IV? I don't like. F minus minus. The rhythmic pattern throught the whole thing adds to the feeble-ness. Also, no cadences makes for a sad panda.

Those right-hand chord-arpeggios things near the end are fun though. I should use those more often.

Miguel says fail, so so do I. :D