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Default 1st poem attempt....

What a wonder this World can be , a clear glass without a top, or a spinning bottle full of poison, discontent and agony....




A broken shoe to wear, with a hole for the loose toe, or a well worn shoe 2 sizes too small.


The scare crow with no limbs and straw in his chest, or the brave politician with an free pen arm and no heart.


Each and all needs the other to be full , but one must be more than the other.


In dark shadows a light may be found but yet sill darkness will always be.


A chandeliar that is once turned off and yet turned on again once more.


As a faded memory as time quickly passes, darkness turns to light.


Night rides over the world into day, all memories passing by.


Is it a storm that all and such memories shadow our minds, or is it cover from the bright rays from up above ?


Forget not your great pain but remember it in discontent .

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Good write...I reall liked this poem n.n
Old 07-31-2007, 12:13 AM
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too me it sounds like a riddle its well written and i like the mysterious element you managed to put on it.
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