Somewhere Over The Rainbow

frequency · 07-19-2007, 02:03 PM

What's your story, tired old hero?
Lay down your sword
A life full of valour and glory
The angels play their chord

You lived your life
You saw it all
You faced the strife
You took the falls
You've given love
You heared the sounds
You beared the shoves
You've been lost & found
You saw the beauty
You touched my heart
You served your duty
And now we must part
Thank you, tired old hero, for being my dad
For all you taught me, for all the fun we had

Rest now, tired old hero
Your respite is well earned
Hold my hand in silence
As the setting sun burns.

Hi. Yup, strange first post.

This is a poem I wrote for my grandad when we were told he was going to die ((which he didn't)) and I'd appreciate some opinions on it, cheers.

x

Clawsze · 07-19-2007, 02:17 PM

Awesome.

Brennan · 07-19-2007, 02:43 PM

Originally Posted by Clawsze ^

Awesome.

Awwwwesome!

James Leopold · 07-19-2007, 03:24 PM

This is brilliant. I hope your grandad gets better soon.

frequency · 07-19-2007, 04:03 PM

Ta very much =].

Clawsze I want a Death Note... Location: Where hyper and depressed peoples go	#2 (permalink) Awesome.
07-19-2007, 02:17 PM

Brennan Location: 1000 AD (Reddell, Louisiana)	#3 (permalink) Originally Posted by Clawsze ^ Awesome. Awwwwesome!
07-19-2007, 02:43 PM

James Leopold Rufus' identical cousin	#4 (permalink) This is brilliant. I hope your grandad gets better soon.
07-19-2007, 03:24 PM

frequency Location: Where it rains	#5 (permalink) Ta very much =].
07-19-2007, 04:03 PM