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Default A Poem For A Sig Maker's Memory

It seemed like only yesterday
I saw your complement
At how good I was at writing
And how I should keep it up
And then I learned that you had left
To heavenly light and peace
May your spirit rest with God my friend
Until our lives shall cease

Everyone at EoFF will miss you
And I'm sure you miss us all too
We'll see you in another life
In peace in Heaven with you

R.I.P

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Old 07-09-2007, 09:07 PM
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I dun wanna look bad because I know what the poem is about but to be truthful, I think its okay. I don't see lots of interesting writing style in it, its alright. Personally I liked mine better.
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Originally Posted by Goldenboko ^
I dun wanna look bad because I know what the poem is about but to be truthful, I think its okay. I don't see lots of interesting writing style in it, its alright. Personally I liked mine better.
Hey man its the thought really that counts, but thanks for the constructive criticism because its so much better than people saying, "Oh it sucks" over and over like on my old message boards. Its also serious and at least you really took it seriously so thank you.
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Mhmm, it's good that you wrote that, and that you cared... and your right, it's the thought that counts.. don't judge a book by it's cover..
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