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agreed.Ill write E since no one really wanted to write it.
Old 07-17-2007, 08:38 PM
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The Leader looked at the Nobody in the doorframe, sure that if he had feelings he would be furious.
"What are you telling us for? Go get them!" Xyptrak yelled, slightly surprising Maxs, Xyptrak never usually got "angry" with any other nobody....apart from him.
Yaxame started snickering almost nervously as she ran out the door, leaving a trail of slammed doors behind her.
"Maxs, you are excused, you may go too-" The Leader was cut off "Actually, I want to talk about something with you, Pr-" Xyptrak was cut off by the Leader yelling.
"What are you waiting for, VIII, GO!!!" Maxs jumped off his chair and walked out the room, winking at Xyptrak as he left a small grain of sand in the room.

"So, Xyptrak, what is so important you nearly used my name in front of a low-ranked member"
"Well, it's about Kingdom Hearts, I have been thinking.....are we maybe making the same mistakes as our predicessors, Prinxiel"
"No, we are making good progress, the one thing thier Keyblade Wielder didn't have, was the Dark Keyblade"
"Yes, but, last time their leader was driven mad by desire, he sacrificed his members and himself for nothing, he was driven insane! I'm asking you as a friend, think things through before you start making bad choices"
"I do not make bad choices, you know that Xyptrak" At that moment, Xyptrak saw it, Prinxiel's face, if only for an instant.
"......I am sorry for doubting you, I will go now" Xyptrak was shaken by what he saw, he had to get away, he had to.
As he exited the room, he remembered to stand on the piece of sand.

"So you have it, Xyptrak?"
"...." He nodded, still shocked.
"Good, we'll need this" Maxs, reattached the piece of Sand to himself, instantly gaining the whole conversation in his head, when they saw something, VERY surprising. They saw as Oryxu was talking fiercely to Yuki as they were walking to the castle bar.

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Prinxiel walked through his office, limping,
"Why...can't it....be done faster....."
He was in a sort of lab, but in the middle was a large orb, with millions of things inside, almost like another reality, but nmothing else apart from a chair.
"Soon, soon, soon....." He said as he sat on the chair and closed his eyes.....


So I've made the Leaders name, Prinxiel (Prine-Zi-El), un-scamble it for a hint to the story(very small but still a hint)
Please change the name on the Bio of "The Leader" on the front page Hazzard, Thank you.

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Old 07-18-2007, 11:00 AM
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Zaimaxu and the traitors working with Clara's friends? So suddenly and so unexpectedly. All they know is that he could be chatting B/S to get them back into prison. Also, leaking out so much info to a powerless little kid while you're a strong nobody is unlikely. Hmm, I'm not keen on where this is going...
Old 07-18-2007, 08:57 PM
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Unless the only reason you leak the information is because you have a little love interest in that kid.
Old 07-18-2007, 09:18 PM
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Originally Posted by eiko guy ^
Unless the only reason you leak the information is because you have a little love interest in that kid.
uh, that's ME you're talking about...

*inches away*

*cough* anyway, that's a good point, I guess I did it as both a writer's convenience to explain the plot and also because I have a plan. I'm taking jail duty, remember?

*sigh* and maybe I don't have a LOVE INTEREST *cough* but perhaps I have a soft spot for kids. I'm a kind and considerate person who frequently doesn't plan everything right away.

(I'll think of something)


plus I'm thinking maybe they're more capable than 'a couple of kids'
Old 07-19-2007, 04:19 AM
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Yeah, Hazzard, give the Ninja a chance.

Anyway, what's the turn order now? Clawsze and then Celestial, right? If so, I wanna write after her...
Old 07-19-2007, 08:21 AM
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I will be leaving for 1 week then I shall be posting less often, DO NOT PANIC....this message will go boom in 5 seconds.
Old 07-20-2007, 03:08 PM
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So... Celestial's next, right?
Old 07-22-2007, 01:56 PM
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