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[Clawsze]

Meh, I'll be gone for a while (week) after Friday, i may be able to post once during that week, but it is highly unlikely, after that, for the next 4 weeks, I will be posting, but less often....I'm going on holiday to NJ for a week then Puerto Rico, so I will be 5 hours behind.

LET THE STORY CONTINUE!!!!

Maxs stared at the door in front of him.
Man, this isn't going to be pretty... he thought as he entred the meeting room, where 2 members were sat on the highest seat on the seat to the right.
"Ah, Maxs, how did the mission go?" The one in the tallest seat asked, turning away from Xyptrak.
"Well....It went wrong.....a lot..." Maxs stared at the ground as he tried to make a portal to his seat, failing.
"Maxs, don't you remember, you can't portal in to, out of, or around the castle, why do you think we make you portal into the city when you arrive or leave?" Xyptrak asked, a distinct hint of impatiance and possibly anger.
"Oh, right sorry" The lesser replied, lifting himself to the seat with some sand.
"Now, the mission, what went wrong" The Leader seemed calm, strangely so.
"Well, that big thing took the bribe-"
"-Which you forgot, just as well Zaimaxu sent one of your Raider Nobodies to you" Xyptrak added.
"-Yeah, anyways, he didn't really get anything we wanted, no keyblade, no Girl, not even one of her friends as a lure"
"And what of the possessions" The asked, as if generally interested.
"It took her when I fought her, she was unconciouss at that time however, so that was no improvement" Maxs swore he saw Xyptrak hint a nod at this.
"But, she gave into it conciously during a fight with the large thing, but she went out of it when the battle was over....she was normal.....wiped out....but normal." Maxs sighed.

"......Good work Number VIII, this report is useful, it seems you have some use after-"He was cut of by a large slam of the doors and Yaxame burst in, panic on her face.
"The prisoners, they're gone!"

Which story branch should we visit next?
A: Stay with the 4 in the Throne room?
B: Clara and the boys?
C: Felix and Zaimaxu?
D: The Heartless Commitee?
E: Yuki and Oryxu?
F: Dun-dun-DUN!!!!(Mystery Option)

Assistants only: Also, when we need certain things done, I will post them on my first post of this topic, PM me the info of the needed bit, or if it is Bio's ect. Post them on the first page...speaking of which, go check my first post now.

[~Storm Ninja~]

OOOH! C!

I think I write next, and if it's C, that works out well, I think I know what I'd do.

[Clawsze]

I too vote C, and I claim to write F and possibly A when they come up, as A loosly relates....very loosly.

[Hazzard]

I vote C, and I'll write a chapter in D when the time comes.

[~Storm Ninja~]

Here goes nothin'...

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Zaimaxu stared blankly at Felix for a second, then resumed panicking.

"You can't be here! the cell, and the thing, and the other-"

"Shut up for a second!" Felix yelled, much to Zaimaxu's disliking, as he began to panic even more.

"Sssssssssshhh! someone's going to hear us...." with a particularly uneasy tone on the word 'hear' "You have to get back in the cell before someone notices...

Suddenly he heard footsteps.

"Oh my god... Hide in here!" Zaimaxu said in a shrill, whispered yell as he threw him into his closet. Felix could only let out a cut off "Wha-!" as he was thrown amongst the Nobody's belongings.

"Zaimaxu! the prisoners have escaped!" Yaxame yelled nearly breaking the door off of it's hinge.

"What!?, I'll... I'll send out the dusks and have them report back to me." he tried to say as surprised as possible.

"Right, you do that" Yaxame said a little sarcastically. She ran down the hall excitedly, probably eager to recapture the prisoners that she lost before she was in worse trouble.

Zaimaxu sighed. "She bought it. You can come out.

Felix lurched out of the closet and grabbed Zaimaxu by the collar, restraining himself not to yell and draw more attention with his fury. "Okay, look pal, you've got a HELL of a lot of explaining to do. I've been kidnapped, crammed in a jail cell, separated from my best friends, thrown in a closet, and NOW you're acting all CHUMMY on me!!! Now START TALKING!!!"

Zaimaxu was genuinely surprised. He almost thought he felt fear for a moment. He sighed deeply.

He started speaking erratically. "Okay, I'm part of a secret organization of people who lost their hearts called Nobodies. We call ourselves Organization X sort of in homage to the previous organization-"

Felix interrupted speaking just as fast. "Wait, you lost your hearts?"

"Yep. Emotions with them."

"Wait, I thought it was Organization IX"

"New employment."

"Oh... Wait, there was another organization!?"

"Yep, Organization XIII. Had the exact same goal as us, get out hearts back. Their leader went psycho and tried to take over Kingdom Hearts to do it. Sora stopped him."

"Who's Sora?"

"Previous Keyblade weilder."

"What the hell is this Keyblade thing?"

"It's a key of magical power that also functions as a weapon-"

"I gathered that."

"Let me finish!- wait, hold on a sec." A dusk appeared behind them, and Zaimaxu turned and spoke to it for a moment.

"GrawwWk!"

"What!? You found her? Get her back in the cell!"

Felix interrupted again. "Back in the cell!? we just escaped!"

Zaimaxu turned cold. "Do you want your friends back home safely or not!?"

"...yes."

"Then you have to get back in that cell before they suspect something."

"Who?"

"The rest of the Organization."

"You're trying to betray them?"

"Actually, there's about four of us- just another sec-"

Dusks accompanied Yuki into the room.

"I thought I said- nevermind, we're all here. Now back on to the Keyblade."

Yuki cut in. "What ARE those things?"

"They're Dusks. They're a different kind of Nobody."

"Why are they all-"

Felix stopped her "I'll explain later. it's complicated."

"Anyways, the Keyblade. It has the ability to lock and unlock virtually anything, but it's primary purposes are to open or close the gates between worlds, to lock the Keyholes of worlds in order for it to be safe from evil creatures called the Heartless. They steal people's hearts in order to multiply. that's why us Nobodies even exist, if you can call it that. Basically what happens is the heart gets consumed by the darkness within itself should one succumb to the Heartless. From there, the darkness takes a shape, and becomes a new heartless, with the victim's heart sealed inside. Normally if you can even kill them to begin with, they just reform later, but if a Keyblade strikes it down, the heart is released and returns to Kingdom Hearts- being the biggest reason the Keyblade exists. Regardless of what happens, the victim's body becomes a Nobody, and those very strong of heart retain the general shape of their bodies. Now, somewhere out there is a Heartless for each nobody, save it's been destroyed already, and it contains their heart. The Keyblade wielder can release the hearts. That's what we need your friend for."

Felix finally spoke. "So let me get this straight. You're an organization of people who had their hearts stolen by these heartless things. You need your hearts back, but you need the Keyblade to do it, so you need Clara. I get that. But, what is Kingdom Hearts, why was the last Organization trying to take it over, and why are you betraying the Organization, much less explaining this!?"

"Well... Kingdom hearts is the source of all hearts. It's where all of them come from, and when they return to when they die. You see, Organization XIII decided that the only way they could reclaim their hearts was by taking over the source. My colleagues and I are jumping ship because after doing some research, we discovered it was more than likely our leader is going to try to do the same thing, and we think that he is either doomed to fail, or... He'll succeed."

"Yeah, well, isn't that what you freaks want!?"

"We think that if he succeeds, there could be dire consequences. Plus, we have reason to believe that he's criminally insane. Not a good combination."

A thought occurred to Yuki. "Well... even though this is all very strange, we'll help you out if we can."

Zaimaxu heard footsteps.

"Someone's coming... You can start by making this look convincing."

"Huh?"

Zaimaxu grabbed their arms as Xaetes walked through the door.

"Ah! Xaetes! I sent out my search party and finally caught these two escapees before they could do any harm. You know, maybe I should take over prison duty, seeing as Yaxame couldn't seem to pull it together."

"Maybe you should" she said, apparently convinced. "But who's going to take kitchen duty?"

"...Give it to Hexra"


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well, that's a major plot advancement.

[eiko guy]

I vote that this story has branched out so far that it is slowly going to get tangled up.

[The_White_Wizard_of_Fynn]

Don't worry, if the editor does his job well *winks at SN*, that won't be a problem anymore. Anyway, C gets my vote. Anyway, are we letting Felix look like the one on my drawing, or do we modifying him?

[Clawsze]

Originally Posted by The_White_Wizard_of_Fynn ^

Don't worry, if the editor does his job well *winks at SN*, that won't be a problem anymore. Anyway, C gets my vote. Anyway, are we letting Felix look like the one on my drawing, or do we modifying him?

We will change him slightly, but the appearence is okay, we just need the colours....