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alright,people....we have an enormous problem.

the last time someone posted here,it was february,and that person is and admin.do you see where this is going?we haven't written in a month.there is definatly something wrong here.we need to post something!!

when i return from wherever i am going,i'll edit this post with a chapter.this story was a good idea!!
Now that's the spirit! I'll post something tomorrow! I also have a new picture of Dixos (experimenting with DA NU STYLEZ), but it's too bright when I take a picture of it, so I have to wait until I get a scanner, hopefully for my birthday along with a new comp (June...).
but we're still not GETTING anywhere.wizard,will you keep this story up with me??I honestly think we're the only ones that care.
I care, I'm just trying to avoid spam. I think Hazzard has quit/forgot and SN is just...actually, now I said his name, he should be here.
Old 04-05-2008, 08:37 PM
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Story'll be up tomorrow. But I have an appetizer for now It's like the ultimate Dixos! And there's a bonus, too (close enough to your vision, Celestial?)
EDITGA!
Story time!
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'Alright!' shouted Yaxame gleefully. All the other Nobodies glared at her, the Heartless extinguished and the platform empty '350,000! My life record!'
'Pft!' said Hexra 'You're still no good. I got 500,000! How much did you finish off, Girax?'
'Um...' said Girax, staring on the ground '185,000.'
'Oh well...' said Hexra 'Still good for a first try, right? How about you, Oryxu?'
'720,000.' she said coldly.
'Wow! That makes you a winner!' said Hexra clapping his hands in his usual manner 'Let me fetch the-'
He froze as he turned around. Seeing that all the other Nobodies turned around as well.
'Holy!' exclaimed Yaxame.
'This is private property!' said Girax.
'Who are you? Oryxu asked the crowd before them.
It was too late. The crowd off people was now charging towards them with even more Heartless. Even though none of the Nobodies had said anything, they were all pretty fatigued by the fight. Damn... thought Oryxu. I won't make it...
'Oh poopie!' said Hexra 'I'm going to have wrinkles!'
'It', like, goodbye cruel world!' said Yaxama laughing her head off.
'I'm going to die on my first battle? Lame...' sai Girax, disappointed.
'Enough!' said Oryxu urgently 'We can fight them!' Just as she finished her sentence, a Behemoth tackled her, making her lose consciousness.
Then all the people gathered on the platform felt a great surge of energy running through their interiors. All the Heartless disappeared.
'What?' said Miriel emotionlessly.
'No!' cried Maleficent in disbelief.
On the middle they saw a tall man in a black cloak. As he took of his hood, he revealed long white hair with a small amount of black stripes covering his eyes and most of his face. There was a large earing bearing the Nobody crest on his left ear.
'Et in Arcadia ego...' he said sarcastically to the gathered Committee, spreading his arms and grinning.
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OK, now let's try to keep it flowing.
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Nice chapter. As I said before, you can count me out of the regular cycle, but I'll try to write periodically, at least.
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So I guess it's up to Celestial, Clawsze and me. It's your turn now, Celestial, and how about that flashback scene after that, Clawsze? Please, let's not stop!
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I've got the Clara chapter!!FINALLY!!I was too busy drawing chibi pictures...

I'm going to write on Clara's side,because I'm afraid of not knowing who that man is.....
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"So...."Clara said after an hour of silence."Where are you guys...uh...from??"she awkwardly asked the blindfolded man who had been standing behind her for the past half hour.
"......."
"I can't tell if he's asleep or awake!!"Clara thought."And why does he keep looking out the windshield?"then,just to test,she shot at a harmless comet floating nearby...
"So he is asl--"
"Why did you do that?"he asked,making Clara jump and nearly swerve the ship into a giant comet.
"Bored!Bored....I was just bored."
More awkward silence.
".....so....you guys...are our enemies,right???"
"As of now,I think it's safe to say we are on your side."the man replied coolly.
"Why?"
.............
"Prinxiel--I mean,the leader of the organization,doesn't seem to be thinking as straight as we thought he was.Number 5 thought it might be a health issue,but she's not allowed to examine the superior."he said with a slight smile."However,"he started,his smile dissapearing,"I wish she had had time to look at Maxs,he's in bad condition."
"Well,I'm sure there's someone in Joal Canyon who can look at him."Clara said.Though she highly doubted it.She hadn't even known the pile of sand in the back sitting next to her sleeping friends was a person.
"There is no one in that town qualified to look at him."he answered quickly.Clara was rather suspicious...how did he know the people there?"I'll have to contact her...somehow....."he said before sinking back into the copilot seat.
His slowed breathing told Clara he had fallen asleep.

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Old 04-10-2008, 07:24 AM
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***********
'P... Prinxiel!' said Maleficent as her jaw dropped. She didn't know why though, she had met him before... but something was different.
'Indeed...' said the white-haired man in a mocking, deep voice and started laughing madly. The laughter stopped so abruptly, everyone was dumbstruck. Who was this madman?
My... thought Oryxu It's worse than I thought...
'We... came to take this-' started Maleficent, her confidence leaving her, but then Kefka interrupted her.
'Fool!' he said 'You have no idea who you're dealing with! I'm a god!'
'Are you, though?' said Prinxiel, tilting his head a bit to the left, like a German shepherd staring staring at a squeaking toy. 'Define "god"...'
'I...!' started Kefka nervously. He did not expect this kind of answer 'I do anything I want with the world and its people!'
'Oh?' said the Organizations superior, now tilting his head to the right 'You mean like this?'
He snapped his fingers and a whole legion of Nobodies appeared. Oryxu found them different, distorted and somehow... out of place. These abominations were never meant to see the world outside... But outside what, she thought. How did these Nobodies come to be?
'Crap!' cried Kefka 'Run for your worthless lives! To the Sin!'
The Committee didn't hesitate to make a run for it. Oryxu could see that they barely managed to escape - the Nobodies were real monsters. Blood was everywhere and some of the Heartless Committee members were severely injured. One of the Nobodies landed right in front of Oryxu. The most disgusting creature she had ever seen - long, crooked, as if boneless white limbs, two long black wings, that resembled scarves, that were blowing freely in the wind. The most repulsive thing about the Nobody was the face - no eyes, just a triangular hole with asymmetrical teeth with blood dripping from their tips and a slimy pink tongue. Oryxu couldn't look at it, such was it's ugliness. Luckily it vanished soon after, leaving only a long trail of blood and a piece of Kefkas colorful clothing.
Before she knew it, the Heartless Committee had disappeared. The only ones that remained on the platform were number one, four, nine, ten and herself.
'To the meeting room. Now.' said the superior in a calm voice. Having seen the last scene, none of the members hesitated in doing what their leader said.
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'HOW!' cried Maleficent, the left side of her face massacred, Kefka sitting next to her, gripping his bleeding leg and gritting his teeth. 'That was not the Prinxiel I knew. We don't stand a chance against this man...'
'Well...' said Kefka, standing up slowly 'Guess we need the help of someone as powerful.'
'You don't mean...' said Maleficent, she noticed Kefka go pale 'her?'
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Almost everyone was present in the meeting room. The leader on the top chair, Dixos to his right, sitting silently, Hexra, Oryxu, Yaxame, Girax and even Xaetes was there, for she had just returned from her mission. Zaimaxu still lay in the hospital, his injusries not yet healed.
'We need new members...' said Prinxiel 'Since two had abandoned us.'
'I can take care of that!' said Yaxame, enthusiastically.
'No.' said the superior 'Hexra and Girax will do that.'
'It's an honor' said the mentioned men in unison.
'I therefore declare this meeting closed.' said Prinxiel, remaining calm ' Xaetes - you stay and give me your report.'
'Yessir.' said the silver-haired woman.
Later, as Oryxu entered the hospital wing to check on Zaimaxu, she noticed Dixos sitting next to number 7's bed.
'I'll be keeping my eye on you, kitty.' he said in his deep, growling voice.
'Don't you dare call me that.' she said and noticed an ugly grin form on Dixos' face 'You recover quickly.'
'Thanks to this healthy body.' he said, thumping his chest.
'Why won't you just tell him about us?' said Oryxu.
'He's got other matters... I'll be taking care of you guys. He doesn't need to know everything - the fact that the two of you betrayed him would hurt him even more badly.'
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OK, let me just explain the phrase used in my last chapter. 'Et in Arcadia ego' means 'I'm in Arcadia as well.' It was a phrase often used in baroque literature, meaning that death is everywhere, even in paradise. I thought that kind of fitted Prinxiel, since he practically is everywhere (or at least knows what's going on) and he brings death. Damn, I love literature

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Originally Posted by The_White_Wizard_of_Fynn ^
OK, let me just explain the phrase used in my last chapter. 'Et in Arcadia ego' means 'I'm in Arcadia as well.' It was a phrase often used in baroque literature, meaning that death is everywhere, even in paradise. I thought that kind of fitted Prinxiel, since he practically is everywhere (or at least knows what's going on) and he brings death. Damn, I love literature
literature nerds,unite!!maybe that's why we're the only ones still here.... if my luck holds,i may be able to write the next chapter in the library.there's endless possibilities!!ENDLESS!!!muahahahahahaha aaa!!!
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OK, let me just explain the phrase used in my last chapter. 'Et in Arcadia ego' means 'I'm in Arcadia as well.' It was a phrase often used in baroque literature, meaning that death is everywhere, even in paradise. I thought that kind of fitted Prinxiel, since he practically is everywhere (or at least knows what's going on) and he brings death. Damn, I love literature
literature nerds,unite!!maybe that's why we're the only ones still here.... if my luck holds,i may be able to write the next chapter in the library.there's endless possibilities!!ENDLESS!!!muahahahahahaha aaa!!!
You do that, then I'll write another bit!
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