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Hello I'm tomboy08 and I know I'm new here but I will go with B.
Old 09-04-2007, 09:16 PM
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Originally Posted by tomboy08 ^
Hello I'm tomboy08 and I know I'm new here but I will go with B.
Welcome, Konichiwa, Bonjour and Hello, I hope you enjoy our story and vote regulally.
Old 09-05-2007, 04:57 PM
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Originally Posted by Clawsze ^
Originally Posted by tomboy08 ^
Hello I'm tomboy08 and I know I'm new here but I will go with B.
Welcome, Konichiwa, Bonjour and Hello, I hope you enjoy our story and vote regulally.
lol, if anyone suddenly gives a damn about writing a part of the story...
Old 09-05-2007, 09:02 PM
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im leaving right now....erm.....cant write....but please please vote tomboy!!be a regular customer!!!ill pay you!!with....cyber...money...

PLEASE vote.we need more advertisements....
Old 09-06-2007, 02:12 AM
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we need more advertisements....
Does anyone have access to flash movie making, we could put a subliminal message in it, LOL.

Who is next....
Old 09-06-2007, 09:08 PM
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I've been keeping up a bit with your current status, and right now it seems you have a lack of viewers. As one of the more popular writers here I feel it is my job to give some advice.


You need results. You've done a lot of work thus far, but when I surf through this thread, I see very little work, I see little that impresses or catches the eye, and WAY too much behind the scenes work. I great example is the first post. Your first posts should contain some work that you've done, perhaps a excerpt from your best fight scene so far, and the first Chapter (I recommend you make Chapters so people can read the story more easily).

People don't like to read what you have right now because there is so little actual work inside of the thread. Your thread is your advertisement, now use it.
Old 09-06-2007, 11:28 PM
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That makes sense. EVeryone is a loose thread you should tie it all together for a minor fight to show clara just how weak she really is. Then let her branch out again maybe with a new party because she was seperated from her old one.
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if i could make a suggestion,all the behind the scenes stuff could go in another forum,and then the story part could be posted here....that might make for some problems though.
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