I hate you

eiko guy · 07-07-2007, 10:55 PM

Well i was watching my favorite show and it inspired hate inside of me. It reminded me oof all my emotions that have been pushedbacked and ignored. Roll all of that up and this is what you get:

You left me by myself
How could you
I want you back
I hate you
I need you here with me
You were the rock how can't you see
Don't you know how much I need you
We can't do this alone
I shouldn't hate you
But I do
And you'll never know

Yep pretty much said "screw rhymes" i went for raw emotion. Not my best work but If I acted this out you guys/girls would be in tears.

Goldenboko · 05:19 PM

Not bad...
It kinda reminds me of a poem I heard in some movie I can't remember what the movie was....
I'll back when I remember.

EDIT- There's no punctuation whatsoever though, which makes it difficult to read and understand how the original flow was suppose to be. Next time I recommend you put that in.

Brennan · 07-09-2007, 05:16 PM

Pretty impressive eiko guy!

Dynast-Kid · 07-11-2007, 06:30 AM

I agree with what Boko said, but it was really amazing! Good job, and I suspect that I know what this poem is really about, but that's besides the point...

Do you have any more tasty poems like this you have horded away?xD

eiko guy · 07-15-2007, 04:56 PM

hehe no this isn't about my break up. I don't hate him. But when i think of him their is this pressure in my chest that leads to my throat. Okay I hate him but this is about something else.

Goldenboko I believe I can fly! Location: USA	#2 (permalink) Not bad... It kinda reminds me of a poem I heard in some movie I can't remember what the movie was.... I'll back when I remember. EDIT- There's no punctuation whatsoever though, which makes it difficult to read and understand how the original flow was suppose to be. Next time I recommend you put that in. Last edited by Goldenboko; 07-09-2007 at 05:19 PM.
07-09-2007, 04:59 PM

Brennan Location: 1000 AD (Reddell, Louisiana)	#3 (permalink) Pretty impressive eiko guy!
07-09-2007, 05:16 PM

Dynast-Kid SOLAR RETURN YAY! Location: The land of Interwebz	#4 (permalink) I agree with what Boko said, but it was really amazing! Good job, and I suspect that I know what this poem is really about, but that's besides the point... Do you have any more tasty poems like this you have horded away?xD
07-11-2007, 06:30 AM

eiko guy I miss kinje longaway :[ Location: In boring old Texas but in a few years..	#5 (permalink) hehe no this isn't about my break up. I don't hate him. But when i think of him their is this pressure in my chest that leads to my throat. Okay I hate him but this is about something else.
07-15-2007, 04:56 PM