Milf and Neo - Fight for Freedom

NeoCracker · 06-25-2007, 12:28 AM

I'll be going back and forth between this and The Forgotten Graveyard.

This story was inspired by the Manhunt 2 Debate in the Game forum.

Also Bipper, You'll be in this story later.

Anyway, here is Chapter one.

Edit: And Kudo's to those of you who know who Ronald Friedman is, it'll make it funnier if you do.

Agrias · 06-25-2007, 01:01 AM

me love you long time

Gnostic Yevon · 06-27-2007, 01:33 PM

I like the concept, but I think you need a conspiracy of more than one person. Besides which, I'm not clear on who Spoiler: Jack Thompson is.

eiko guy · 06-27-2007, 09:55 PM

^^ well aren't you lucky.

NeoCracker · 06-27-2007, 10:22 PM

Originally Posted by Gnostic Yevon ^

I like the concept, but I think you need a conspiracy of more than one person. Besides which, I'm not clear on who Spoiler: Jack Thompson is.

He's the Lawyer who tried to ban sims 2, Bully, and now Manhunt 2 here in the US. And Friedman is the Judge who held him in contempt of Court for the bully Case.

Goldenboko · 07-09-2007, 05:16 PM

L! O! L!

Jack Thompson and the judge going to war... genius. The writing is okay, it could use detail in certain parts, Spoiler: the flames coming out of Ronald's eyes could've been very dramatic. There are also a few grammar and spelling errors which makes me think you wrote the first chapter in a rush. Anyway I hope you write some more.

Agrias To the moon Alice!!!! Location: looking for a engineer to beat up:P	#2 (permalink) me love you long time
06-25-2007, 01:01 AM

Gnostic Yevon Black Mage Unne	#3 (permalink) I like the concept, but I think you need a conspiracy of more than one person. Besides which, I'm not clear on who Spoiler: Jack Thompson is.
06-27-2007, 01:33 PM

eiko guy I miss kinje longaway :[ Location: In boring old Texas but in a few years..	#4 (permalink) ^^ well aren't you lucky.
06-27-2007, 09:55 PM

NeoCracker I want to touch you	#5 (permalink) Originally Posted by Gnostic Yevon ^ I like the concept, but I think you need a conspiracy of more than one person. Besides which, I'm not clear on who Spoiler: Jack Thompson is. He's the Lawyer who tried to ban sims 2, Bully, and now Manhunt 2 here in the US. And Friedman is the Judge who held him in contempt of Court for the bully Case.
06-27-2007, 10:22 PM

Goldenboko I believe I can fly! Location: USA	#6 (permalink) L! O! L! Jack Thompson and the judge going to war... genius. The writing is okay, it could use detail in certain parts, Spoiler: the flames coming out of Ronald's eyes could've been very dramatic. There are also a few grammar and spelling errors which makes me think you wrote the first chapter in a rush. Anyway I hope you write some more.
07-09-2007, 05:16 PM