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[Brennan]

EDITAGA!!!: Hazle, Red, that's it.
I'll just wright another brief story on Celeste and Toroda. (In a book my mom's reading, there's a woman named Celeste, weird huh?)
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Daylight. Celeste was awake. She yawned and checked up on Toroda.
Sleeping... she plopped down on the ground again.
What happened again? I guess I'll have to remember it. she closed her eyes and thought.
Toroda woke up. Quickly checked his surroundings, and stood. He smiled.
"Ah, that was somethin', wasn't it?" he told himself.
The sun's rising, so that way's west, the other way's east, and north and south is this way and the other way. he thought. So... we need to head in that direction. he pointed north-east.

[f f freak]

I already had an idea of her appearance. I'll be doing this in little segments with quite a few choices.

Amelia froze. Her clan had divided among the trees. They were ready to ambush the caravan. She moved swiftly through the trees, her short, dark hair, gently blowing in the wind. She burst through the trees into the clearing. Loud yells erupted from the caravan as a volley of arrows fell like hailstones. After a few moments only one man was left alive. She pointed her bow at him.
"No!! Please, I beg of you, spare me!" He cried with fear.

Choice for Amelia:
A)Let him Live
B)Kill him
C)Force him to join her Clan

I'll write more after the choice has been made.

[eiko guy]

I like the sound of C

[Hazzard]

C

[Brennan]

C

[eiko guy]

I think we shuold have a villian that is a puppet. A puppet that we can sympathisuze with. A human puppet that doesn't remember that they are only a puppet.

[Edge7]

C
Also...

I think you could do with at least two more, because it's hard to run it all, as you can see in Clawsze's thread.

I'll be one

[eiko guy]

If anyone besides me actually posted. >.> I guess i'm doing it alone.
Ill update amelia tommorrow.