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[Brennan]

OK but you need to edit your post too.

BTW I made a .txt file of the story.
See the attachment.

[eiko guy]

So. OWG do Toroda's prologue.

Should Toroda
A. Be sent to retrieve the jewel by some organization.
B. Be a hunter looking for his next pay day.
C. Be a religious man who came for the jewels safety.
D. other.

Celeste pulled her bag closer. She flipped open the top and looked inside. it gleamed and shined. "I hope this is enough Adamantine." Yawning she closes the bagand drifts back into slumber.

[Brennan]

I'm thinking of an A-C blend

[Clawsze]

B

[f f freak]

Both A and C.

[Brennan]

I'm waiting until 3:00 -5 time and then I'll wright on whatever's chosen.

[eiko guy]

Well I guess A and C win it. Whoo.

[Brennan]

Sorry I'm late!
**************************************** *************
"Toroda, you need to find the Chaos Jewel. It's the only way to keep the world in it's living state!"
"Yessir." Toroda said, grimly.
"Remember, you are a betrayer, not a follower."
"I understand, sir."
"Do not underestimate the power of the Jewel."
Toroda knew what he had to do, get in, take the Jewel, and get out, also to destroy anybody who got in his way.
"I understand, sir." Toroda said. "I will not underestimate the Jewel's power."
***Later***
"You're sure, Mister?..." the man whas in the organization that had the Jewel.
"Victor," Toroda answered, "Victor Marcan."
"So, Victor, you sure you wanna join?"
"Yes, sir."
The man seemed to like the "sir" part. "Are you aware of the power?"
"Yes, sir."
"Good."
The man led Toroda to the room with the Jewel.
"Guard this with your life. Do not part from it. If you do..." the man chuckled, savoring the idea.
***Three days later***
On a normal day, waiting for a distraction to happen. A flash appeared down some stairs, exactly what Toroda needed.
When everybody was out of sight, Toroda felt the crystal, "Hot..." he muttered.
"Excuse me..." A feminin voice said behind him.
Toroda did the thing that came naturally, draw his greatsword.
"Who are you? What do you want?"
"Well, I don't think I should tell you, with you pointing your sword at me."
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Well, you know the rest!

So next we'll make Celeste meet...

A. Kyro
B. Jena
C. Amelia
D. Jade