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[Hazzard]

I think you could do with at least two more, because it's hard to run it all, as you can see in Clawsze's thread.

[Brennan]

Originally Posted by Hazzard ^

I think you could do with at least two more, because it's hard to run it all, as you can see in Clawsze's thread.

True.

[eiko guy]

I know she won't meet anyone in the deserted town. she may catch a glimpse of someone later on. But first we need to see what she looks like. All characters need an appearance.

I imagine a blong with braids in the front and hair held up in the back with hair sticks. Blue eyes.

Anyway time to vote for her appearance.

Eye color

A blue
B hazel
C Green
D Brown
E other
hair color
A blonde
B black
C brown
D red
E other
Hair style.
A other specify.

A, A, two large braids in the front that frame her face. and hair held up in the back with hair sticks.

[Brennan]

Eye: A
Hair: A
Carefree hair.

[Laddy]

A,A, Very long and flowy, bright and kept down whle it shines and sparkles.

[eiko guy]

So i guess her eyes will be blue. Noone seems to agree on hair style lets see how this plays out.

[Brennan]

Originally Posted by eiko guy ^

So i guess her eyes will be blue. Noone seems to agree on hair style lets see how this plays out.

Change my vote to A, we need to finish this thing and get on with the story.

[eiko guy]

Okay Now I see her. Her clothes will be black leather pants and a leather vest. She wears a brown trench coat along with red gloves.


Celeste had been listening in on her boss one night when she heard him talking to his wife. "Looks like we'll have to close up shop." he whispered sadly to his spouse. Celeste didn't need to see Ms. Staley to know that she was going to object. "But we could-" "Do nothing." Mr. Staley interjected firmly. "The new weapons shop down the street has finer weapons and have stolen all but our most loyal customers" he stated apparently polishing a weapon, he set it down with a soft clink.

Celeste looked at the miners town. "So this is where I can obtain some ore and Adamantine?" She asked skeptically. She walked into the town with her hand ready to draw her spear. "I don't like the feeling of this." She looked to herself and saw a shadow pass by a window. It wasn't human that's for sure, and she wasn't sticking around to find out what it was. She quickly drew her spear and began sprinting towards the mine.

She was half way there with the place in sight she let loose a sigh of relief. She reached the mines and she felt a cool breeze escape from the mouth. Afterwards it felt surprisingly warm in the cave.

Should she:
A. Enter the cave
B. Go back to town and confront what she saw.
C. Yell into the cave and see if anything happens.
D. Throw something into the cave.