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[sir helix]

ill be posting bits and pieces of this story part by part so bare with me.



XENOSAGA:
trapped in the souls of war by. scott heath




CHAPTER 1 the shards of fate


(new vatican)
Helix woke up and swallowed hard. he glanced over on his nightstand were a zohar shard lay dorment and piecful. three years ago the great golden cross called the zohar was distroyed by a force with in its own structure , all that was left were shards that scattered threw out the galaxy. one ended up on the out skirts of new vatican were realiens are dumpped and left there for worse. helix was a rare prototype b-m realien. he was michine but yet had humen organs. his thick purple hair was tangled and notted, he wore rags of ripped clothing. an explosion came from the not too far distence of his quarters. he jumpped from his bed , pulled a small but strongly built dagger from his belt and dashed out the door.
realiens ran towards the site of terror with weapons ready in hand. a large A.G.W.S witha black cannon began fireing on them without mercy. helix gripped his blade with rage and barly dodged a bullet from and enemy gun. he took cover behind a bolder along with six others. x-135 were is our leader? said a realien fireing a laser rifle at incoming soldiers. then from the dusty distence appeared a blur haired figure that held out her right arm and a large gatling gun emerged from it butchering the enemy. most soldiers tryed to flee but only got shot in the back.

(aboard human war ship)
Dont do this i just wanted you to help me find KOS-MOS. yelled a young girl pushing her way to the ships captain. miss uzuki please this is war and we ditected a zohar shard near by so if your preshis robot is here its a rogue and must be distroyed. the man laughed. no!! you cant hurt her i wont let you. the girl cryed. then two men puled her out of the brige.
she ran down a long narrow hall and pulled a small comlink from her pocket. captain mathews are you there. she yelled. then a hologram of a mans head appeared wearing a truckers hat. shion whats wrong. he said. i need you guys here now! shion screamed. sorry but chaos is missing, and little master is on fith jerusalam with the professor. mathews croaked out fast. do you know the wereabouts of ZIGGY and MO-MO yet? asked shion sliding into an elevator shaft. yeah there kinda lost in a time rift. be careful we'll be there soon. will do. shion said placing the comlink back into her pocket

(new vatican)
Helix lay witness to the brutal massacre of his people. then a familier voice filled his head. "dont kill them my son". helix fell to his knees. mother. he cryed.
a large white and green ship flew over head folowed by a red and blue war ship. a small pod launched from the war ship and landed about six yards from the blue haired figure. shion ran from it and straght towards her. "she is good not the enemy". KOS-MOS stop this madness. shion yelled. KOS-MOS looked at her and began mumbling to her self.
deleted data file retrived, former chief of vector shion uzuki, primary target confirmed. she then turned her right arm into a blade and thrusted forward. helix jumpped in front of the blade taking the full power of the blow. hey you okay miss? he groaned stairing at KOS-MOS. yeah but why did you? my mother told me that your the good . he then placed his hand on the zohar shard around his neck and he snapped the sword in two, his eyes let off an eirie glow and seamed to be over powering KOS-MOS. shion reached for her comlink and called the elsa. get down here quick KOS-MOS has become infected by a zohar shard in this aria we must debug her. helix lunged his blade into KOS-MOS's left shoulder panel and his dagger shaddered. he then changed back to normal and fell to the ground. shion you there little master is on his way with a small gift for you. as matthews finished a small pod landed beside them and a boy with red hair jumpped from it and let loose a laod of bullets on KOS-MOS. Jr is that realy you? shion asked helpping helix too his feet. processing lost data recovery, 666 rubedo half of negredo and albedo, son of dimitri yuriev. KOS-MOS said to herself. my mother says to leave new vatican. helix murmered softly. shion we gotta go we can come back later i dought she' goin any were any time soon. Jr then helpped shion with helix and ran back to the elsa.

(the elsa)
hey who are you and why did you save me? shion asked setting helix down on a bed. im helix , and my mother says that your shion uzuki and that your her friend.
he mumbled softly. your mother who is she? her name was febronia, but iv never met her,but febs a realien i do know her. shion frowned. all i know is that im made from her cybernetic structure and my fathers decayed organs. helix finished. do i know your father as well? she asked. his name was luis vergil and our leader killed him.





CHAPTER 2 deep space terror

(?????)
ZIGGY we,ve reached the eye of the time rift. Where to now, MOMO asked, typing away at her computer. we must find the bug in the genesis program, its the key to the lost E.S craft that we found in michtoms core. ZIGGY guided there ship through the eye and came upon the floating ruins of a temple. MOMO are the repairs on the zebulun complete? he asked. the repairs are currently at fourtysix percent completion. MOMO said still typing. then we have no choice but to use the A.M.W.S we recovered from old miltia, ready. asked ZIGGY. ready. then ZIGGY climbed in to an old rusty mech and flew towards the temple folowed by MOMO in the ship. a steel casket like object engulfed in a glissning light. i getting a strong A.I reading from the case it is the key. yelled MOMO. Ziggy grabbed the casket in a large iron clasp from inside his craft. the box then began to vibrate and a short odd shapped mech was left in his grasp. what is it MOMO? ZIGGY asked aiming a rifle at it. its letting off the same charge as the E.S craft. "I am biological ultra gnosis massecre energy nulifier,or BUGMEN as my creator calls me. it talks? ZIGGY yelled in a puzzled manor. pardon me sir but i believe you have my brother aboard your vessle, permission to come aboard? BUGMEN asked. permission granted.

(on ZIGGY's ship)
this E.S craft is your brother?MOMO said. greeting bugmen. yes that is true and he only listens to me.laughed bugmen jumpping up and down. oh and i believe you once new a friend of mine named zebulun no? ZIGGY gave him a stare. you know the E.S zebulun? why yes i know all my brothers and sisters, zebulun has told me great things about you two. BUGMEN then opened his claw to reveal an E.S transporter. does that make you an E.S as well? he asked . heavens no I'm a.... ZIGGY we have guests. MOMO ran up to them with a bow in her hands. "hello jon saur" said a voice from the walls. Erich your not dead? ZIGGY shouted.

(ruins of michtum)
all my comrades lost and departed please find guidence in the afterlife. jin bowed his head at a cathedral on the lost planet of michtum.
Jin uzuki put your hands up or die. yelled a soldier from behind him. wel it seams that you'll have to kill me. jin stood up and unhed his katana. the soldier charged at him fireing there guns. jin evaded them all with elegant ease. you cant kill what you cant catch. he smiled.jin uzuki you are wanted for the murder of colonal margules.shouted the soldier. yes i killed him but it was for the better good, why cant you fools see that. you murdered him with that blade uzuki now surrender. cooed a voice from the door. jin turned to face the person and he fell to his knees. pellegri...

(the elsa)
helix was place in a nano cell for healing wile shion talked to jr. so what do we do with him shion? jr asked taking a seat. i don't know, he says he is the son of febronia and vergil. shion listen to your self thats impossible they're bodies were blown up when vergil activated the realien selfdistruct code. he said softly. yeah but he explained that his body was once hers and his organs are made from vergil's, it,it makes no since.she placed a hand on the glass of the cell and turned around . jr was silent. jr.....jr are you alright..jr. shion brgan to shake him. "he cant hear you shion" she turned back around and came face to face with kevin. ke..kevin. she backedup to the wall. "so i see the unfinished being has wound up here" he gazed at helix's lifeless body. dont touch him hes hurt. shion yelled as a shield like weapon appeared on her left arm. " i wouldn't dream of hurting him iwas going to finish him, you see he was an idea of mine after idied so i changed the past a bit". kevin began typing on a computer. what are you talking about. she screamed now clutching the weapon hard. " i removed this boys parent beings from the miltian church be for we ridded ourselves of it". we whoes we? "voyager and i , oh you can thank your friends ZIGGY and MOMO for releasing us from our time still prisons, wel my work here is done till then". kevin vanished. shoin ran over to the pc. oh no! shion began typing. hey whats wrong? jr asked.
he's uploaded the KOS-MOS and T-ELOS files into helix. she cryed. jr glanced in at helix. his body was coved in mechanical arms attaching defrent parts to him. who' did this? it was kevin he's back him and voyager. jr cut her off. wait if he's back then that means gaignuns back as wel. let me out of here. helix yelled at the top of his lungs. shion opened the cell door and he fell to the floor his clothing was now red and blue armour that resembled that of wich KOS-MOS wore...



CHAPTER 3 the genesis program completed


(out side the elsa-ZIGGY's ship)
MOMO call the elsa have them open the hanger hurry. ZIGGY ahouted. captain open the launchbay we are coming in fast. roger that MOMO, hammer open it.matthews ordered kicking hammer's chair.the hatch opened and the ship skidded in side. ZIGGY, MOMO, and BUGMEN jolted from the ship and ran towards the bridge. hey old man weres the fire? jr joked. iv no time for jokes jr, weres shion, erich is right behind us. ZIGGY demanded. i'm here? she said meeting them out side the bridge doors. ZIGGURAT 8 and MOMO right? helix asked. " now i can kill you all at once" kevin smiled. BUGMEN stepped forward amd touched helix's back, black tesement voyager lets take this out side. " as you wish" voyager snapped his fingers and they were all in a field. transfre E.S bugmen yelled holding the genesis holder in his claw. a large green and red mech decended from the sky, helix and BUGMEN climbed aboard. E.S GENESIS is now operational BUGMEN said with delite. transfer E.S. said MOMO as her and ZIGGY took the controles. Hiya zebulun. BUGMEN waved from GENESIS. hey dont for leave me out of the party. said a voice from a dark blue E.S in the air. look its the asher. jr yelled. i found canaan. chaos shouted from the craft. hey jr mind being co-pilot for once. asked shion. oh yeah lets go. he cheered. shion held her comlink in the air and yelled transfer E.S. a blue and white mech was befor them and they took controle. "now now" Dinah, Asher,Zebulun, and the great GENESIS. this will be fun". voyager laughed. remember every one this'll be tough without anima so be carful. shion ordered. hey missy uzuki, my big brother here has anima. BUGMEN cheered. are you serius? ZIGGY asked. thats right ZIGZIG. he said as GENESIS aimed a gient gatling gun at voyager. anima wakening. BUGMMEN said as lasers shot from the gun and knocked him back visiuslyso GENESIS still has anima, wel soon he will fall like the other. barked voyager fading out of site. the ground began to split and white light blinded them all.



(new michtum city)

Jin uzuki you are charged with murder in the first degree, how do you plee? yelled a judge. guilty as charged your honor. jin frowned srairing at pelegri. the judge then spoke to a tall man beside him. the penelty is death by blade.he screemed hitting a wooden base with a small mallet. jin was haled off and locked inside a steel cell with plasma beam bars. jin, are you so fradgile that you be taken hostage by your owwn will? who..who is there? jin said with a worried voice. i,m one of few .the person laughed walking from the shadows of the cell. your a testament? he growled jumpping from his seat. yes i am the yellow testament. the woman said folding her arms on her chest. i am the will of whats left of your love. she held out a silver katana , take it and set your self free.


(the elsa)
hey shion waht are you doing up so early? jr asked rubbing his eyes. im checking what data was put into helix when kevin appeared here. she said typing fast and careful.
lets see he has the weapon system of T-ELOS and the basic defence meckanisims of KOS-MOS, theres also a file in here but i cant access it. may i try? asked MOMO walking into the room. be my guest but i dought you'll be able to.. i'm in. she said cutting shion off. so what is it? jr asked placing his hand on MOMO's shoulder. it seems to be a transmission of somekind ill play it now. two holograms matereolized on the screen. shion gasped at the two figures. its kevin and voyager? she cooed. shion if your watching this then that meens that the helix project has begun, i would like you to meet our two new recruits, kevins voice said as two more figures appeared. one was female in a yellow testament suit and the other was a male in a green testament suit. since albedo and vergil betryed us we have found more reliable assistence. then the transmission stopped. two more of those bastards to deal with, dammit. jr yelled.

[eiko guy]

I like the story but a little more puncuation would be appreciated senor helix.