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#1  what do you think? i'm writing a FF7 fanfiction and i have the first chapter. can somebody tell me if it's good, or give me suggestions? Disclaimer: i don't own FF7 or it's characters summary:Avalanche arrives in Rocket Town when they run into a mysterious stranger who seemingly has a phobia that drives Yuffie insane, Questionable traits, and a secret that could change their lives. Chapter 1: Arrival Run. Run as fast as her legs would take her. She had been running for what seemed like forever. Pain surged through her body weaving in and out of her muscles, but it didn’t matter. She had to keep going, keep running from the dark cloud that loomed over her head, constantly reminding of the morbid past that threatened to devour any sanity that she had left... A small rebel group called Avalanche quickly headed out the Nibel mountains and Northeast towards Rocket Town. “Gawd Cloud! We’ve been walking for DAYS! I’m tired, hungry, and I feel like that Sephiroth dude is cutting off my legs! I swear, if we don’t stop soon...” “Rocket Town is right up ahead. We can rest at the inn and stock up on our supplies when we get there.” The young ninja was cut off by the leader of the group, Cloud Strife. “Yea, so shuddup’ brat!” the founder of Avalanche, Barret Wallace, added loudly while waving his gun-arm in the air. “You so did not just call me a brat. If I wasn’t so tired I would go all ninja on your butt!” Yuffie threatened, making a violent gesture with her hands towards the large man. Just as Barret was about to argue back the young flower girl from the slums of Midgar spoke up quietly. “Please, arguing isn’t going to get us anywhere, besides, look. We’re almost there.” Aeris pointed towards the large, green, rocket that cast a shadow over the grassy plains that surrounded the area. “I agree.” added the fiery, crimson, cat-like creature that they came to know as Red XIII. “Arguing will only waste our energy and I for one do not want to have to carry Yuffie to Rocket Town.” The group nodded and continued towards the rocket mostly in silence. The newest member of the band of rebels was an ex-turk named Vincent Valentine. He had remained quiet through out the journey but decided to speak up on something that had been bothering him since they had gotten out of the Nibel Mountains. “We should stay on guard.” he brushed a stray strand of ebony hair out of his face before continuing in his monotone voice. “I’ve been feeling a strange presence ever since we left the Nibel area. It’s been getting stronger as we get closer to Rocket Town.” Cloud nodded in affirmation. “Everyone stick together and be on the lookout for anything strange.” he ordered the group while unsheathing his signature buster sword. Tifa, Cloud’s childhood friend and martial arts expert, moved closer to Cloud and scanned the area with her wine-colored eyes. Hmmm, Vincent usually doesn’t say anything unless it’s important. Gods I hope that he’s wrong. She thought while chewing on a loose strand of hair. A nervous habit that she had, had since she was a small child. Crimson eyes surveyed the treeless landscape searching for any sign of danger. Nothing, not a thing in site except for that rocket. The dark gunman continued following the others at the back of the group, silently pondering the oddly familiar feeling that he had been having. It was as if something was begging him to find whatever it was no matter what the cost. The feeling got stronger and stronger with every step as they neared the entrance of the town. He reached down and switched the safety off of the outsider. He had to be prepared for anything at the blink of an eye. “What’s wrong host, scared of what you may find? And here I thought that you were fearless.” Chaos sneered in the back of his mind. I am simply being cautious. I am a bit anxious to find out what is bothering me. Vincent replied to the beast that was caged in the back of his mind. “You think that I don’t feel it either? Your even more stupid than I thought you were.” The beast really was quite annoying, unfortunately it was usually right. He mentally shrugged off the feeling and continued to follow the rest of the group in silence. After walking for nearly another hour they finally trudged into Rocket Town and towards the inn. Cloud shuffled up to the front desk and rang the bell. A short man with wide rimmed glasses arrived shortly after and looked them over before asking: “Hello, do you need any help with anything?” “We need three rooms please.” Cloud responded quickly handing the man the amount of gil needed. The older man gave them their keys and made a nervous face before heading back into the room that he previously came from. The group walked up the stairs and stopped at the top. The blond sighed loudly and turned to speak with the others. “We’ll have to split into three groups of two. Yuffie and Aeris in one room, Barret and Tifa in another, and Vincent and me can also share a room. Red, you can stay in my room and Cait can go in Tifa and Barret’s room. Let’s all get rested up and meet outside the inn at seven o’clock tomorrow morning.” Once Cloud finished, everyone headed to their rooms and went into town to do what they wanted. |
06-02-2007, 08:47 AM
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