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[musicsoccer]

note: i had this idea on another game thread (Everquest Online Adventures, doubt you guys ever heard of it or played it) and i forgot about it until now so i'm making a Final Fantasy type one (prolly a mix of cities, people, ext).

(since i'm bored lets start off in the middle of the series)


Episode 25: Fash and Tristy Airship Enterprise

As Fash went aboard the Airship Enterprise, Fash looked back and saw how long the entrance line was. "Thank god we got here five days before the airship opened because we wouldn't be able to get on it with a line this long."
Tristy agreed and they walked into the airship and it was bigger and more beautiful than they both had immagined.
The airship had an enourmous ticket counter to where Fash and Tristy had thier tickets scanned and activated with radiation to prove the ticket was true. Beside the ticket counter was a competition counter to where Tristy ran to sign up for every competition she could, not caring if any two or more competitions collided with each other. Behind these two counters were a handful of doors to which lead to different areas of the airship. The door on the far left led to the captains headquarters and is marked "Employees only". The door next to it led to the engine room, also marked "Employees only." The door on the middle wall led to the competition arenas, which rumors spurted about the birth of a legendary pokemon named Pyuutoo. The door on the far right leads to the thousands of billions of rooms to which the luxury airship is famous for.
"I'm going to check out the arena" said Tristy as she ran off without letting Fash reply. Standing there confused, Fash desides to try finding the room he reserved for himself and Tristy. "Lets see.... room 324B...."

"HEY FASH!!!!"

Fash looked behind him and he saw Hrock running towards him, but he looks a bit different since the last time.
"Fash, meet my new girlfriend Randy"
Randy blushes and smiles as Fash softly waves.
"What room number are you Fash?"
"234B..."
"GREAT! we're right next to eachother! Where's Tristy?"
"Snooping around the arena."
"Same ol' Tristy haha"

Hrock sprints away towards the arena with his new girlfriend and Fash winds up infront of his room. He opens the room with his radioactive ticket and gazes.

The room is filled with Trikatchu posters, bed covers, sink covers, and toiletpaper. It's like they knew his favorite pokemon...

"The airship is about to take off, all passengers are aboard. Please be seated."
The airship starts to shake then rise slowly into the air. Many tourists are leaning over the handrail waving to thier loved ones while others have thier eyes closed wishing they never got on.

Hours later after Fash wakes up from his nap, he notices Tristy in the room wearing some strange shiny clothing.

Is there something kinky going on with Fash and Tristy?
Will Hrock ever find out that his "girlfriend" is really a guy?
Will the airship competitions lead to more rivalries?

Tune in next time for episode 26: Competitions or fraud

[Firo Volondé]

So... are the first 24 chapters floating around in cyberspace somewhere, or is the story meant to start at episode 25?

[musicsoccer]

meant to start at 25 (note this is just a fun story i decided to type out of early-morning boredom, might write more sooner or later)

[Firo Volondé]

I see. The story has a lot of potential so far. Keep at it.

[Hazzard]

It would be even better if you started from the beginning, and introduced the characters to us, I like the idea, and it does have a lot of potential.