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[Spawn of Sephiroth]

Ok, here is my new poem I just wrote about love, and my failed two year relationship. I feel like this is one of my better works, so I hope you like it and please tell me what you think of it.



In this world, there lies a disease,
it takes life from you, and one you can't please.
It's bad enough to strip a man straight down to his tears,
it rips him apart, exposing all of his fears.

Everything about it is built up to be great,
but catching it only leaves you with a lonesome and horrible fate.
Anyone can catch it, it's not that hard to find,
but watch out, it only leaves you with a ed up mind.

It's everywhere you look, it's everywhere you turn,
don't let it trick you, it's red as a rose and a fern.
At first it feels sweet, you think things are meant to be,
but it only fogs up your mind, so the truth you can't see.

You think you can trust it, so you start to let your guard down,
then you find your feelings just trashed outside your town.
You then realize it is the disease with no cure,
it feels like death soon awaits you, and that you know for sure.

If you catch it once, you can't leave it behind,
everything you bust your ass for is left in the sands of time.
You wonder why this is happening to me?
Why can't it be great, or atleast meant to be?

You cry, scream and yell out loud,
then your confidence is broken, and you are no longer proud.
This life just doesn't seem to be worth it, you turn to the dark,
can't anything go right, rekindle or spark?

The pain from this you will never shake,
you begin to wonder, just how much can I take?
The stress on my shoulders is a bomb waiting to explode,
the pain and lies make my wrath unload.

You want this pain to leave, but then you are soon alone.
then BAM, right in front of you, your life begins to unfold.

[Masamunemaster]

I didn't want to be the first to give feedback, but since nobody else will.....

It is stupid(love) and you have finally came around to realize that, but I hate that you had to find it out when you did. Just remember you will still have your friends who will never you over

[Spawn of Sephiroth]

YES!!! So many replies. I love you guys.