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[xxp0lanc0xx]

Hey ya'll ive been thinking since everybody has somthing to say about ff in ways they could make it better or it doesent have a good storyline why not trying to make up your own story for ff its takes time an alot of hard work but if its good then who knows it could be the next ff game so thts exactly what i did let me know what yall think so far.....

ok so we start off with a sunset and a city in the distence it looks like just a ordinary city but as we start to move in we start to see smoke then it start pulling in faster and faster untill theres a giant explosion and we see people fighting theres a huge war goin on civilions are fleeing people are being sluatered you can hear the screams of soldier, children and those being sluatered as we keep moving over the crowed of ppl fighting we come to a monument in what looks like a town center. here a young boy and his mother can be seen fleeing while soldiers are hastefully chaseing them they slip away in an allyway but they know there not safe for long the mother clutching her son in her arms an inocent couple also fleeing gets caught by the solder and while pleading get cut down right infront of the mother and child who are hiding in a pile of trash behind a dumpster the soldiers angry and fustrated tht the boy an his mom got away call in there search dogs and let them loose to catch anybody still in the area the mother see's a vent right next to the wall were there hidding but knows its only big enuff for her son without hesitation pushes her son in and says " stay here and be quiet just always remember i love y.." but before she could finish her words one of the dogs has found her and draged her out screaming in pain the boy sits there and crys trying not to make a sound in his head screaming mamma mamma the soldier throw her against a wall there sharp gun blades taking aim we star pulling awayfast going upward passing airships in dog fights suddenly the sky gets dark and seems as if its cracking and then bursts we go back to the city were everyone is shocked at what has happend a soldier about to cut down an old man stops bcz there is a masive gust of wind the old man mutter "they have finally come we may now be at peace" we see coming from the sky gods and there pulling threw the sky a massive creature everything is silent the creature roars and screams can be herd from below all of a sudden the creature and the gods send a gigantic white light down into the city everything is destroyed and soon the light fills up the screen and everything gets dark .... we hear a voice "...mankind is evil....they cannot live in peace...were ever mankind is there is turmoil...never... never had we the gods had to interfear..but that day..that day of days..we had to come fourth from heaven and liberate all mankind...that day..let us hope we never have to see another ***** **** (cant tell you the name yet its very important) .......... a silence occurces another voice is herd "wake up..come on please wake up...(NAME) WAKE UPP..

and thats what iv got so far i need a name for the main character can you guys help me out and tell me what you think about my storyline so far thnks

[Hazzard]

Obviously you're new here, and didn't read the rules. n00bs make those mistakes, so this is to be placed in the Writer's Corner.

[Mirage]

And those who have been here longer still make the mistake of making another post about that instead of reporting the first post.

:p

[Renmiri]

Wouldn't his idea be a Role Play thread ?

[xxp0lanc0xx]

lolol yes im new here but you guys are only saying were i should put it not wat u think of it lol can somone tell me what they think of it and if it sounds like somthing a future ff game would do?

[Albel]

Well, its good. But if you replace the soldiers with monsters then its just the same as the FFXI opening until you get to the bit about the gods.