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[Arc_Master_14]

ok im not much of a poet but every once in a blue moon a get an idea for one this is one of them crtic i dont care I can take it sometimes as my friend Rudy would say theyre " HELLA DEEP" most of these poems are somewhat about my life to be totally honest

The Tunnel
Light at the end of the tunnel
seemingly unreachable
Going one step forward two steps back
never reaching it, til the end of time
when a thought strikes the mind
turn around... and have a better perspective
make it to the end, full of happiness
remember this though,
happiness is overrated

Love
Losing a love is always tough
stick through it and be strong
maybe they'll see what they're missing
maybe they won't
but love comes and goes
but once you have you thats different
and you know its true
be happy and dont lose it
its what you truly want
even if you don't know it yet

[Ace14]

Those are really good, I like the first one better. I'd give you some advice, but I'm not good at giving advice or critisizem.

[Arc_Master_14]

Pain
When pain seems inevitable
dont avoid it
it only makes it worse
take it head on from the beginning
and get over it quick
your life will get better.
but if you avoid it for too long,
your life will become hopeless
You will sit alone and sad for ever,
and try to get away.


This is something I had in my head for awhile but I never really wanted to put it down because its a real part of my life I was going to get hurt really bad and I wanted to avoid it thats when I thought of this...

[Ace14]

Oh! Nice job, are you talking about what I think you're talking about? You know...that one person.

[Arc_Master_14]

...DUH Last one for tonight i hope lol

Life
Life has its ups and downs
round and rounds
loops and curves
keep to the good parts
get through the bad quick
your life will be better
You can count on it.

[Ace14]

Lol again really good! I never expected you to be such a good poet no offence. You should write more poems, I think your really good at it.

[4evarisha]

Its really good I like the meaning in each of them nice job!

[Arc_Master_14]

Past, Present, Future
Looking ahead ,looking behind
seeing what happened, and what will come to be.
Sometimes it bad, sometimes its good
Its the same with everyone that you must see
Past, Present, Future
some are the same
learn from your past
and correct your future

Friends
Sometimes friends aren't really friends
They say they are but when the chips are down
They run they get away and forget about you
But when you find a real friend you know it
you start feeling hungry 'cuz they take your food
They never knock on the door to your heart
because they are always there
and they have your back no matter what.


I just totally noticed im missing parts in this one I wrote it earlier on word and mustves missed stuff when I copied and pasted it