[P] im not a poet but i make poetry... - Page 2

Ace14 · 04-14-2007, 10:30 AM

Good job I like the second one.

Your writing has a lot of meaning... it has a lot of feeling.

Arc_Master_14 · 03:51 AM

Light
Light from the heart
light from the sky
Light shines and hope reins
but with light there is dark
wheter its a shadow
or a bad person
Yin and Yang
Land and Water
Opposites one and all
but allowing for eachother to stay

Oh yea and my english teacher called me a poet for this one poem but its too long to post

Ace14 · 04-25-2007, 07:24 AM

Again another really good one, you're a really great poet. Hmm...I could probably think of more to say but Im kinda sad right now. Still good job and keep up the good work.

Arc_Master_14 · 04-28-2007, 03:04 AM

Perspectives
If you see something one way
But not another
you may not know the whole story
you may need to see things from more than one way
to actually know what it is your talking about

Ok I need some help i need three or so poems for one of my English projects so please some suggestions about which ones you like

Ace14 · 04-28-2007, 03:26 AM

Another good one.

I think Friends, Life, and Light are the best ones for the project. Hey do you think you could write a poem for my project?

Arc_Master_14 · 04-28-2007, 03:30 AM

NO ANTHONY!

Ace14 · 04-28-2007, 03:38 AM

Aww meanie!

Oh well I'll just write my own...could you at least help me write them?

Arc_Master_14 · 05-01-2007, 04:54 AM

Okay right now i would like to say I didnt ake up this quote below

"Every good guess has a good reason."
-Nicole Datlen

Ace14 Now comes in a can Location: Calafournya	#9 Good job I like the second one. Your writing has a lot of meaning... it has a lot of feeling.
04-14-2007, 10:30 AM

Arc_Master_14 それは、彼女が言ったものです！ Location: Turn around	#10 (permalink) Light Light from the heart light from the sky Light shines and hope reins but with light there is dark wheter its a shadow or a bad person Yin and Yang Land and Water Opposites one and all but allowing for eachother to stay Oh yea and my english teacher called me a poet for this one poem but its too long to post Last edited by Arc_Master_14; 04-25-2007 at 03:51 AM.
04-20-2007, 06:57 AM

Ace14 Now comes in a can Location: Calafournya	#11 (permalink) Again another really good one, you're a really great poet. Hmm...I could probably think of more to say but Im kinda sad right now. Still good job and keep up the good work.
04-25-2007, 07:24 AM

Arc_Master_14 それは、彼女が言ったものです！ Location: Turn around	#12 (permalink) Perspectives If you see something one way But not another you may not know the whole story you may need to see things from more than one way to actually know what it is your talking about Ok I need some help i need three or so poems for one of my English projects so please some suggestions about which ones you like
04-28-2007, 03:04 AM

Ace14 Now comes in a can Location: Calafournya	#13 (permalink) Another good one. I think Friends, Life, and Light are the best ones for the project. Hey do you think you could write a poem for my project?
04-28-2007, 03:26 AM

Arc_Master_14 それは、彼女が言ったものです！ Location: Turn around	#14 (permalink) NO ANTHONY!
04-28-2007, 03:30 AM

Ace14 Now comes in a can Location: Calafournya	#15 (permalink) Aww meanie! Oh well I'll just write my own...could you at least help me write them?
04-28-2007, 03:38 AM

Arc_Master_14 それは、彼女が言ったものです！ Location: Turn around	#16 (permalink) Okay right now i would like to say I didnt ake up this quote below "Every good guess has a good reason." -Nicole Datlen
05-01-2007, 04:54 AM