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[Fatal Impurity]

Hey this isnt actually my song but rather a friend of mine...he wanted me to post it up and find out what you guys thought of it...


Such a young soul

Maybe we. Why dont we sit
right here for a while,
We'll speak of what a waste I am,
and we missed your beat again

I swear we need to find some comfort
in this run down place, To bridge the gap
of this conscious state that we live in
Im short of time, Times running out

How come you try to fit the shape
of what they tell you, but mostly
what they show you, that brings us
home, I pray for you to move on

We walk back alone

you're almost gone and I'm ok to give
you time to be afraid, I still see your shadow
but never see your face again, I remember
your face again, I remember your presence

I hope to god you come down
I hope to god you can feel this now
I know there must be some way out
of here, and all of them will be waiting there

written by Matthew Cleaver and dedicated to Nathan Gutridge

[Polaris]

It's brialliant! I really enjoyed it!

[Hazzard]

I actually like the song, maybe cause i didn't just read the song-I'd tried singing it in a rockish sort of voice, and liked it.

[TonightWeFly12]

Wow... this angers me alot... these are the lyrics to an actual song by a band called Underoath. Your friend is plagorizing, written by Mathew Cleaver my ass. This song is called Writting On The Walls. Here see for yourself.

Here's the music video. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPFi2LE8P68

Oh and btw these are the real lyrics.

Writing On The Walls

Maybe we, Why don't we sit right here for half an hour
We'll speak of what a waste I am and how we missed your beat again

I swear we need to find some comfort in this run down place
To bridge the gap of this conscious state that we live in
I'm short of time

How come you try and fit the shape of what they tell you
But mostly what they show you that brings us home
I pray for you to move on

At this rate we can't keep up but I sure can't just sit still
I'm taking back all the things I said
Keep me filled in, I swear Ill come

We walk alone back home

You're almost gone and I'm okay to give you time to be afraid
I still see your shadow but never your face again
I remember your presence

I hope to God you come down
I hope to god you can feel this now

I know there must be some way out of here and all of them will be waiting there

...

[Fatal Impurity]

Dude that mother ****ing smurfer! Thankyou very much for that info dude i really appriciate it! After he bloody made me think that he wrote himself the little arsehole! I actually thought it was good too! Im soooo gonna smurf his ass after this little stunt! Many thanks TonightWeFly12!

[TonightWeFly12]

haha no problem man. I'd be pretty pissed too, if I were you. XD

[Fatal Impurity]

I've had a look around the net for other songs he supposedly "wrote" and they've all been stolen from Underoath! All he did was swap around the titles...man i cant believe the nerve of that guy!

[Polaris]

Can't believe I thought the world had a new talent! oh well... u can post ur stuff omegaweapon2005