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Balthier Rocks
As The Crow Flies...
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Location: Onboard the Strahl, in Bournemouth
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This is my 1st time writing here so plz don't bump/bash/flame/whatever

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We all want to know, " how the heck did Balthier Spoiler: survive that crash on the ship like thing! so this is my view on how he survived....

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Ashe screamed "Balthier" as the strahl sped off away, away from the sky fortress Bahamut, which was sticking out of the ground near Rabanastre....

Balthier woke up, he knew he had crashed, since all round him was scraps of metal and bits of wiring. He coughed, and smelled the unmistakeable smell of smoke. He had to get out fast, but as he tryed to get up he shouted in agony as his leg was broken. He neverless stood up and limped to the exit door but then he heard a familar voice... It was fran he thought. He could not abandon her when there was the risk of fire, and toxic smoke. So he bravely limped, although rather slowly, to where he heard Fran's voice. he could not see, since the smoke blinded him so the only sence he could rely on was his hearing. Fran's voice grew louder, so Balthier knew he was close. He tripped on something, and just saw it was fran. He struggled to pick her up, due to his leg, but somehow managed to pick Fran up and then traced his path back to the exit hatch/door.

When they got out, the smell of fresh air hit Balthier like a ton of bricks. Tacken aback, he almost stumbled on a bit of girder. But he managed not to fall and continued limping far away from the fortress, for the fear of fire still loomed. When he got to a suitable didtance away from the fortress. He lay down Fran and sat down himself, he was tired, and knew that if he fell asleep, he might not wake up...

But a new danger loomed over the two, fiends or monsters, cretures like slaven might think Balthier and Fran as easy prey, as well as other monsters. All Balthier could do is hope, hope that someone, anyone, would come to his aid. He checked on Fran for a pulse. There was a faint pulse, but still, she needed urgent medical attention. And so did Balthier.

Hours past, and Balthier started to feel hungry, he has not eating for a day, and Fran 2, and was worried, was he going to die? Was Fran going to die? What of my friends? However, while he pondered these questions, someone put his hand on Balthier's shoulder, Balthier jumped,and moaned in pain. A passer by asked if Balthier was alright, and that he will get the ambulance. Within minutes, medical services and police was on the seen. Balthier and Fran was on the ambulance and was transported to the Rabanaste local hospital. While the police guarded the scene. Balthier told all of Fran's details as she was unconscious at the time. Also, all of Balthier's moogle mechanics was on board.
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Old 03-05-2007, 08:56 PM
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