[P]random poetic experimentation

nik0tine · 02-27-2007, 10:14 AM

Life
is like a set
of nice toy
blocks!

*Warning* qu i c
k l
y
fa
l
l s
ap
a r
t
.

Moon Rabbits · 02-27-2007, 09:23 PM

I like it, the emphasis on nice toy blocks fits really well, I think. I think something other that *warning* might work better though. Maybe that's just me.

nik0tine All about looking. Location: Dalmasca!	#1 [P]random poetic experimentation Life is like a set of nice toy blocks! Warning qu i c k l y fa l l s ap a r t .
02-27-2007, 10:14 AM

Moon Rabbits so gangsta it hurrrrts.. Location: Caaaaaaaanada.	#2 (permalink) I like it, the emphasis on nice toy blocks fits really well, I think. I think something other that warning might work better though. Maybe that's just me.
02-27-2007, 09:23 PM