Poems from the heart. And limb. And hair.

IBCrayZ · 02-13-2007, 03:28 AM

These are some poems I wrote today. I will add some past poems and more as I write them, but that will come later. Anyways, comments and critisism welcome.

Truthful Lies
Disturbed and distraught
Just leave me alone
Hiding from myself
I am lost on my own

My mind is struggling
Putting up a fight
Should I ask for help
Or come clean this night

Can I allow myself
To trust society
Will they accept
What is really me

Yet my fear is controlling
I can't let it out
Their words are full of
The enthusiasm they spout

Acceptance is one thing
That I rather want
So I can take off my costume
And lose my disguising front

But times are changing
Getting harsher for me
Confusion is reigning
Breathing and running free
-Feb. 12, 2007

My Pride, My Torture
Confused and alone
Is this how I really feel
Surrounded by friends
These pains make me keel

All this anger
That I old inside
I release it on nothing
I still have my pride

Something is wrong
Am I going insane
Why is death so appealing
And life so profane

Control and corruption
They target my soul
My peers are my killers
Death is on a roll

If it would just take me
Not torure me so
Things would be easy
I would let go
-Feb. 12, 2007

Momiji · 02-13-2007, 03:36 AM

Very nice! I don't have any criticism though, I think they're great the way they are.

Momiji Site Staff Allegro Cantabile Location: Loli, loli, loli, get your adverbs here~	#2 (permalink) Very nice! I don't have any criticism though, I think they're great the way they are.
02-13-2007, 03:36 AM