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#1  [p] A Lamentation deleted by author Last edited by opiumcloud; 01-24-2008 at 07:45 PM. |
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 |  This is completely and utterly awesome and it has brought a smile to my pasty white face. I think you overuse I love you, though. I think you can drop some of the 'I love you's from the poem and it will still sound okay. I love you, like the birthday loves the cake. I love you, like the gambler loves his stake. I love you, like the poolman loves the rake. like the halfback loves the fake. ^^ I think it sounds particularily wonderful like that, but im sure you have your own ideas. Keep it up, 'cos I'm not keepin' up with you. |
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