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[fire_of_avalon]

MKusanagi cried aloud with mirth and merriment

A few things
1) Needs a thesis, or more easily found thesis
2) don't know if it was just formatting difference but there seems to be more than one space between words
3) Over page limit

I'm attaching a reverse copy of your work with highlights where I saw errors or where things could be improved. Over all this is a good essay. I need to read that book haha.

The thesis was sooo hard to do because it comprised two different ideas that I felt needed so much background. The reader/grader also mentioned the heavy intro/indefinite thesis. The spaces between words could be a difference between different editions of Word. I double space after periods (because we're using MLA), but not after individual words.

Thanks for your editing! I received a grade for this paper (A- yay!), but I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind for the next.

[MKusanagi]

fire_of_avalon cried aloud with mirth and merriment

MKusanagi cried aloud with mirth and merriment

A few things
1) Needs a thesis, or more easily found thesis
2) don't know if it was just formatting difference but there seems to be more than one space between words
3) Over page limit

I'm attaching a reverse copy of your work with highlights where I saw errors or where things could be improved. Over all this is a good essay. I need to read that book haha.

The thesis was sooo hard to do because it comprised two different ideas that I felt needed so much background. The reader/grader also mentioned the heavy intro/indefinite thesis. The spaces between words could be a difference between different editions of Word. I double space after periods (because we're using MLA), but not after individual words.

Thanks for your editing! I received a grade for this paper (A- yay!), but I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind for the next.

Meaning the grader wanted a clearer thesis or that they wanted an indefinite one? Yeah, I noticed you were using MLA. I learned something new. Double space after periods, eh? I'll have to keep that in mind. Hope I was of help. I joined to late to be of help, huh.

[fire_of_avalon]

She wanted a clearer one. And your suggestions will definitely be helpful for next time!

[MKusanagi]

I'm relieved. But keep on this thread because I'll be sending in some things soon.

[MKusanagi]

Here it is in .PDF format

[eestlinc]

anyone want to peer edit my law review article? I am going to assume not.

[Ouch!]

Given that I just played Ocarina of Time again and found myself angered by the excessive use of the exclamation point, this idea is probably perfect for me. Unfortunately, as one of eleven freshmen English majors, I've become the editor for just about everyone on the floor (assuming all the people who have promised to bring papers will). I love editing stuff, so if I've got free time between papers, I'll definitely give this a shot.

[MKusanagi]

Well, this thread is officially pointlss.