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Can you disinclude the 'Eileen made this!'?
Old 07-08-2006, 06:57 AM
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I love the Tidus and Yuna one it is so cute.
Old 07-08-2006, 06:59 AM
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Your second and third one are probably the best out of your four walls, due to the amount of editing required.

The first wallpaper is terribly bad; yes, the skies merge rather well, but Tidus's sword and hand do not and shows how horrible the merge of images actually went. The added images of Yuna and Tidus add nothing to the image than try to make it look busy; there is nothing balanced by their offset placements and they draw your attention away from the main pictures of Tidus and Yuna. Looking at the wallpaper as a whole, my eyes slide right through it, following the heads and I take nothing in at all.

Your fourth wall is bad not because of the standing images of Tidus and Yuna, but rather how it was done. You can still see edges of white surrounding both of their heads, showing that they do not really belong in the wallpaper; they do not seamlessly flow into it. The same effect occurs because of the coloring of the same two images as well; they are a great deal brighter than the rest of the wall and stand out too much. The last error still deals with the same two images; they're just pasted on the wall. Very little, if any, effort was made to make them become part of the wallpaper. You can still see Square's original copyright behind their feet and that is just a load of unprofessionality. It's almost as if it is saying that you took an existing wallpaper, added text over the lovers, threw in several boxed screenshots of the two, and tacked on two more images just to call it your own. Editing out the copyright would have gone a long way in making this better.

In all of your images, your tag of "Eileen made this!" damages every image. If these are wallpapers to be shared and used, any little credit line should be placed in a corner with as little emphasis on it as possible so as to not detract from the image when it is displayed on one's desktop.
Old 07-08-2006, 08:28 AM
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Thanks again for all the nice comments!!

And Her Majesty's Agent Umaro -- thank you for your criticism. As always, it helps me imporve for maybe later wallpapers.
Old 07-12-2006, 02:21 AM
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I've decided to use this thread as wallpapers and signatures, so here's the signatures part.

I'm still learning with Photoshop, so they aren't all that great yet. I'll get better over time, hopefully These are from oldest to newest -- the oldest being maybe over a year old (I just never put it up.)


















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Old 08-16-2006, 07:45 PM
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I think the best one is the Yuna one you are using now, nice BG.
and yes, you'll improve with time.
Old 08-16-2006, 08:08 PM
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wow cool! *passes out*
Old 08-18-2006, 02:04 AM
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Thanks for the comments

Im really looking forward to when I "get better in time." xD I don't have time to make a signature now, but maybe i'll do one tomorrow ...
Old 08-20-2006, 06:49 PM
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