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[Polaris]

omg that kitty looks sooo cute <3

[ShunNakamura]

Indeed, evil cats are cute .



Being in the concept stage I haven't really played with lighting or blending of most objects yet, nor have I done much border wise(other than the curtains which are part of the concept). I was mostly getting everything placed and sized how I wanted it.

Oh and these were the original stocks used for the BG/FG
Curtians
Background

Edit- And the main render was

Edit in Edit - Fixed another mistake in the render
From this image

Edit2- A somewhat poor attempt at lighting

[Polaris]

I think this one is your best so far. Really clean and with great depth

[ShunNakamura]

Well I decided to add some sparkles(since you can bet that such a scene in anime/manga would probably have sparkles, flowers, or hearts flying about. I figured flowers and hearts would be messy though, while sparkles might be doable). Probably overkill though. But figured I would ask. Execution is probably bad though. I don't really know how to do that sparkle effect(other than brushing over the image).

Also I attempted to fix some issues with the back renders faces/heads. Mr. Exia Piliot in particular looked odd to me.

[ShunNakamura]

Not a signature, but I figured I may as well share this. I took this and came out with the following.


Clearly I was out of my league when I started this. I must have been clinically insane at the time. Regardless though It is 'usable' at least.

[Polaris]

wow that's really awesome! I suck at rendering but that's perfect

[ShunNakamura]

Actually after posting it up I noticed many issues with the render :/. A 'fixed' version. Still some white fuzz and a few spots bug me... but I think I have spent enough time on it .